Ohh, I so like this. I just finished the twilight books and I am definitely obsessed. I couldn't put them down.
Even though it's angsty, there's just something that I love about Jacob's non-returnable love toward Bella. I guess I'm a fan of the whole jealousy thing.
Thanks for writing so many great fan fics!

Very well written. sad as all get out, but very good.

This was amazing. I loved it, and seeing it from this POV just made it even stronger. Keep it up!

I don't really mind that you didn't go by the book but this was a nice little story though the last part wa confusing ^.^'.

this is awesome and exactly like jake.

Aw! poor Jacob!
ps. you're not the only one who cried for him in Eclipse! ToT

This was incredibly sad. Oh gosh, how sad it is. It makes an excellent story for Quileute elders to tell of course, and I love the way you ut that in the last paragraph. But pray that won't happen to Jacob! I just want him to be happy. *sigh* I'm favoriting this, that's how good I think it is.

damn you. you made me cry. lovely story though.

I liked the ending. It was really sad :(

wow. I loved it!

you said it just came to you? that's cool. definitly being put in my favs.

aww i kno i felt bad for jacob at the end of eclipse..even tho i knew he and bella weren't meant to be..

*sniff sniff* That made me cry:( Jacob is my favorite charater. ...*sniff*...*sniff sniff*

beautiful! if you do a longer one, you should but it in book form. You have a gift.

Wow I know what you mean about Jacob! I did cry at the end--it was heartbreaking! This is really good-I liked it a lot.

It is very good!!