 LadyDi 10/9/03 . chapter 1Very nice abstract |
 CherrySakuraGirl 10/13/02 . chapter 1Awwww...kawaii fic! I love how the words explain everything so perfectly, and all the metaphors n'stuff. How cool, to compare the relationship between SS to a dance! I love your writing. It's so thoughtful! |
 anon 8/16/02 . chapter 1 I love it! *cries* it's so beautiful! |
 anon 8/16/02 . chapter 1 I love it! *cries* it's so beautiful! |
 anon 8/16/02 . chapter 1 I love it! *cries* it's so beautiful! |
 anon 8/16/02 . chapter 1 I love it! *cries* it's so beautiful! |
 anon 8/16/02 . chapter 1 I love it! *cries* it's so beautiful! |
 anon 8/16/02 . chapter 1 I love it! *cries* it's so beautiful! |
 anon 8/16/02 . chapter 1 I love it! *cries* it's so beautiful! |
 Crazywryter 6/11/02 . chapter 1crazywryter:i'm confused |
 SpringbloomOpal 4/26/02 . chapter 1I usually don't like poetry, but yours was too ggod, i just had to read. I thought it was a bit confusing, but maybe I just have the brain capacity of a two-year-old. ; |
 Alka-Setzer 4/6/02 . chapter 1SUGOI! *sighs* why cant i write like that... |
 Akane 4/4/02 . chapter 1 Now THAT'S kawaii! En espanol, adorable. |
 Wing 2/14/02 . chapter 1 I understood it half-way but then you lost me. But when I think of it a bit more I kinda get it. It's a great poem though I think it's a little too abstract. |
 DuskMagic13 12/9/01 . chapter 1 SSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!ILOVEDAPOEM,ILOVEDAPOEM,ILOVEDAPOEM!ect. |