 Sean Mulligan 2009-05-11 . chapter 8You should update this story. |
 Howard Russell 2007-11-29 . chapter 8That was unexpected. Kudos for that! |
 Arekanderu 2007-11-28 . chapter 8Interesting. I am guessing that reporter will turn out be a part of something bigger? Or is this simply meant to give closure to Faith adn Daria? |
 Allen Pitt 2007-11-28 . chapter 8huh... I could see the reporter becoming a slayer groupie if a slayer let her hang around while she 'worked'... ok, that was a little weird...
And that's the end of Harb... not sure where else you can go with this, but it sure is interesting...
* Um...any chance of a new chapter in the VM/Buffy story? |
 Howard Russell 2007-10-18 . chapter 7Well, with that reaction, a slayer battle in death row seems unlikely. Best for Daria, really. Can't wait to see what you've got planned! |
 Allen Pitt 2007-10-18 . chapter 7So...either she's like Doyle & just happens to be a demon, passing in society, or she's there to spring harbaugh for her dark master or something...hopefully Daria is smart enough to let the woman throw the first punch if it comes to that...
Gee... outed...then maybe tells her she's the Slayer. Ouch. ...
* Dying to find out what happens to Gavin (who had a very smart 'legalist' attack on Angel at one point, ie building permits etc. But never realized that Angel runs a PI company and doesn't have a PI license. ( Kate asked him if he was a detective when she first met him; he said "more or less" --then she asked if he had a license... "that's the less part" ) - |
 Davide 2007-10-16 . chapter 6 Good work again |
 Allen Pitt 2007-10-16 . chapter 6A demon. interesting. Doyle kind of half demon, or a demon demon. I really hope it doesn't turn out Harbaugh was being controlled by one. That she doesn't need to find out...
Cameron--easy (assuming the gloves are off) --morph into Gavin, commit a crime before witnesses & surveillance cameras, make sure they get lots of pictures, then let the law have its way with him. Never get a shapeshifter mad at you-reminds me of a scene in "Darkman" ... |
 Howard Russell 2007-10-15 . chapter 6Heck of a cliffhanger there. Wonder if it's a lawyer. |
 Daisuke 2007-10-15 . chapter 6Great to see more of this, it's awesome.
The plot thickens... :D |
 DAVIDE 2007-09-19 . chapter 5 THIS IS GREAT, BUT I HOPE THIS IS NOT THE END |
 Howard Russell 2007-09-19 . chapter 5Creepy. How does someone deal with meeting the person who killed your entire family? I just can't imagine it. |
 M. Scott Eiland 2007-09-18 . chapter 5 You did justice to both Daria and Faith with the confrontation with Harbaugh. My most sincere compliments on that, and on this story universe in general. :-) |
 fwj 2007-09-18 . chapter 5 I have been enjoying this series especially chapter 5. Is this the end of this part of the story line? Daria leaving seems like a natural end to this aspect of the story |
 Allen Pitt 2007-09-18 . chapter 5hm... I suppose she can meet with friends and/or family...not sure where else this story can go now-- (though it is very interesting)--
Funny to see her reflecting on whether or not she could get through the plexiglass, considering events in that Angel ep-- |