What a great job, this tale really made me laugh and suffer with the characters.

Bec is a very interesting character, but I think my favourite is Judy, who knows everything and is micro-managing the Autobots and the ministry of defense all between cooking breakfast and watering her roses *giggles* It's so hilarious when everyone was freaked out by her knowledge! And Optimus AND Keller are scared of her, hehehe! Your Judy is just made of awesome!

I laughed like crazy that moment when Sunstreaker was so indignant that Bec was dusting her freaking houseplants, but she wouldn't even send him through the car wash. And she'd insulted his color, oh noes! Poor abused Autobot! I was shocked how badly their first "real" meeting went, though. I felt so sorry for Bec.

I love the friendship between Jazz and Bec and watching Trent grow up. At the very least, I bet he'll never vandalise another mailbox! *snickers*

Since there are only two months of the year left, I'm optimistic that we won't have to wait all too long for an update. Am I right? *hopeful puppy eyes* I really can't wait to read more, this story is so addicting!

Please, please, update soon! I enjoy this story and I hope that Bec and Sunstreak get better.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. It's an interesting setup you've got. Judy's a pushy overprotective mother, Trent's trying to get along with 'the gang', and Bec is a delight all by herself. Trying to get away from the life of luxury. Peace.

Cool, update soon.

very well made

Normally, I'd be giddy about the Twins. Still am giddy, after a fashion. But I am really, really looking forward to seeing Sunstreaker taken down a few pegs by Judy. His actions were beyond aft-hood. They were...were... ...I'm not sure what the proper terms would be without launching into a cussing jamboree.

Great story overall. Not what I initially expected starting out, but wonderful none the less. Please, keep up the fun!

I read the first chapter of this awhile ago, I'm so glad you continued writing it. I really, really enjoy the plotline.
Two things though:

Be careful when you're using "Its" and "It's." "Its" is possessive, and "It's" is the contraction "It is." Sometimes the spell checker screws it up.

Second thing:
The twins! I know you're doing an intrepretation of the characters but the twins were my favorites in the series. The twins are somewhat complicated and multi-layered. They are loyal to each other first and foremost, then the autobot cause. Rarely are they ever seperated, and when they are it's only for short amounts of time.

Sunny has the most obvious homicidal tendencies, while Sides is more chilled and easy going but on the battlefield he is as vicious, if not more so, than his brother. Both brothers though respect Optimus and will willing carry out any of his orders without hesitation.


Just thought I'd add that in case you decide to write another story with them ^_^
Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Wow, this is a great story. A gripping read, one that's had me up a good two hours after my bedtime, even. ^_^ I can't help but be a bit sad that there's no chapter six, as you said it would be in six parts. I hope that last bit is coming!

Interesting story so far. I'm really enjoying myself reading it. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to an update! (:

I am still absolutly floored by your writing talent! You juggle so many charectors, so many personalities, and you still do well with them! It's like you're handling five different little stories all at once that braid into the whole, just like a good story does! Thanks for adding more of Optimus for me, I appreciate it! I like the remark you made about his voice, very true! I could listen to him all day...=D Well, here's to waiting for the next chapter, Starkreactor

Eh, update! Though it's an extremely evil cliffhanger you've got going here.

Other than that, I liked the recent interpersonal developments... (is Trent gay or bi?)

Sunny and Ratchet made for one interesting conversation. As did Trent and Miles.

You've asked about the footnotes - after the respective story part seems easier to read, especially since you have chapters that are as long as three of mine put together.

Dude, omg this chapter made up for the long wait for you to update. I love this story, I love how when you update the chapter is long. Lol, anyways I love how you describe everything and show how their's a huge difference on how Bec acts when she's nervous or confident. All in all I like it. XD

I love all of the character development we see going on in this chappy, esp regarding Sunstreaker! It's interesting that in spite of his "attitude" he really gets worried about what the other bots think about him, to the point he tries to reign in Sideswipe and his antics. Not that he would ever admit to that but it seems like he way overcompensates his own insecurities with his angry at the world way of dealing with life. And his taking on Prime about calling his human Bec not Rebecca is certainly telling...as was Prime's response. But in spite of himself, Sunny keeps helping the humans...I think he likes them a lot more than he can admit =) And his rescue of Bec by calling Ratchet has earned him some respect with Ratch, and hopefully Ratch can in turn help him with his own issues. Keep going =) And more garden planning for the win!

No! Don't stop! Nice chapter, though. I was wandering if you were ever going to update!

You're doing quite a good job with the inter-personal relations and the character development. Your introduction of an original character has been smooth and not anywhere near as obnoxious as most I've encountered. I'm glad to see Trent actually has a (developing) personality beyond Caveman and the Autobots are actually acting like a military unit in a foreign land, not a group of buddies hanging out at the humans' houses. The story flows well and your writing style is easy and clear, with enough shadowing and hinting to keep it interesting. I look forward to much more! :D