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| Christine 2008-07-02 ch 10, anon. | abuseWoah, I read all the way from Chap. 1-10 just now, and I think this is the best story on this entire site... This is probably now my favorite pairing for the series (even though it's not shown in the anime or manga. *sob*) You have to continue! I just loved the very end of chap 10, like everyone else who reviewed did. And I strangely adored the dream scene... |
| Hiroko 2008-07-01 ch 6, anon. | abuseShe also didn't care much for Umiko. She was pretty much a bitch to everyone. LMAO way to put it bluntly! |
| Hiroki 2008-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love your story already! And I just love that you based the mother on Naruto since the information on her wasn't given at all in the anime (at least I didn't think so) ; very smart and creative! |
| moons_requim 2008-06-30 ch 10, anon. | abuseAwesome chap :3 Update soon! |
| Jumpingbeans480 2008-06-29 ch 3,  | abusePretty good story! |
| Sabaku no Kurai 2008-06-29 ch 10, | abusewow this is really good so far ... i loves it XD please update as soon as you can! Sabaku no Kurai, the one and only |
| animebebe 2008-06-27 ch 10, anon. | abuseOMG! I love this story so much! Im addicted to this story lol plz keep updating cuz you know you rock! |
| Shu Chen 2008-06-23 ch 10, | abuseNyaa! "You're My Bitch" lol xD Good, Keep it up! |
| Kyuubi-Unleashed 2008-06-23 ch 10, | abuse"good.Cause you're my bitch." LMAO, that's the best way you could ever end a chapter. I was half scrolled down and i was all like "aww's this is chapter is really cute" then I saw that and just started cracking up. This completely makes up for the lateness. See you next update :D. |
| Eriisu 2008-06-22 ch 10, | abuse“Good. Cause you're my bitch.” That was the BEST quote EVER! I died laughing...yet it's oddly enough, true! This was definitely one of your darker chapters (with Kushina's dream being so graphic) but by far one of your best chapters! I loved it and I can't wait for your next update! Keep up the fantastic work! |
| Peridot Tears 2008-06-21 ch 10, | abuseAww, that was deep. That damned grandfather XO That dream really got to me. ~PT |
| xX-Arianna-hime-Xx 2008-06-21 ch 10, | abuse“Good. Cause you're my bitch.” Sorry i just couldnt helpp but laugh then! After all that- i mean god Kushina! Calm down a bit! Lol- amazing chapter as it always is! Poor Kushina and Minato! Kushina's granfather is such a jerk! Now the best couple (other than SasuSaku, Naruhina, NaruSaku) cant be together! Yet! -cheers- Really sweet chapter- dream was kinda horrific, with them killing each other but was still brill! YOU MUST UPDATE ASAP! -huggles- ~Ari-chan |
| Amaya-Chan67 2008-06-20 ch 10, | abuseMake Minato more posecive!! |
| Babyboo294 2008-06-20 ch 10, | abuseKushina very possessive!! |
| anonymousM 2008-06-20 ch 10, anon. | abuseGAH! SO AWSM! hope you keep ur promise and update three times! |