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Christine
2008-07-02
ch 10, anon.
abuseWoah, I read all the way from Chap. 1-10 just now, and I think this is the best story on this entire site...
This is probably now my favorite pairing for the series (even though it's not shown in the anime or manga. *sob*) You have to continue! I just loved the very end of chap 10, like everyone else who reviewed did. And I strangely adored the dream scene...
Hiroko
2008-07-01
ch 6, anon.
abuseShe also didn't care much for Umiko. She was pretty much a bitch to everyone.

LMAO way to put it bluntly!
Hiroki
2008-06-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love your story already! And I just love that you based the mother on Naruto since the information on her wasn't given at all in the anime (at least I didn't think so) ; very smart and creative!
moons_requim
2008-06-30
ch 10, anon.
abuseAwesome chap :3 Update soon!
Jumpingbeans480
2008-06-29
ch 3,
abusePretty good story!
Sabaku no Kurai
2008-06-29
ch 10,
abusewow this is really good so far ... i loves it XD please update as soon as you can!
Sabaku no Kurai, the one and only
animebebe
2008-06-27
ch 10, anon.
abuseOMG! I love this story so much! Im addicted to this story lol plz keep updating cuz you know you rock!
Shu Chen
2008-06-23
ch 10,
abuseNyaa! "You're My Bitch" lol xD

Good, Keep it up!
Kyuubi-Unleashed
2008-06-23
ch 10,
abuse"good.Cause you're my bitch." LMAO, that's the best way you could ever end a chapter. I was half scrolled down and i was all like "aww's this is chapter is really cute" then I saw that and just started cracking up. This completely makes up for the lateness. See you next update :D.
Eriisu
2008-06-22
ch 10,
abuse“Good. Cause you're my bitch.”
That was the BEST quote EVER! I died laughing...yet it's oddly enough, true! This was definitely one of your darker chapters (with Kushina's dream being so graphic) but by far one of your best chapters! I loved it and I can't wait for your next update! Keep up the fantastic work!
Peridot Tears
2008-06-21
ch 10,
abuseAww, that was deep.
That damned grandfather XO
That dream really got to me.

~PT
xX-Arianna-hime-Xx
2008-06-21
ch 10,
abuse“Good. Cause you're my bitch.”
Sorry i just couldnt helpp but laugh then! After all that- i mean god Kushina! Calm down a bit!
Lol- amazing chapter as it always is! Poor Kushina and Minato!
Kushina's granfather is such a jerk! Now the best couple (other than SasuSaku, Naruhina, NaruSaku) cant be together!
Yet!
-cheers-
Really sweet chapter- dream was kinda horrific, with them killing each other but was still brill!
YOU MUST UPDATE ASAP!
-huggles-
~Ari-chan
Amaya-Chan67
2008-06-20
ch 10,
abuseMake Minato more posecive!!
Babyboo294
2008-06-20
ch 10,
abuseKushina very possessive!!
anonymousM
2008-06-20
ch 10, anon.
abuseGAH! SO AWSM!

hope you keep ur promise and update three times!
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