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| mel 2008-05-07 ch 4, anon. | abusethis just became my favorite story in FMA! Simply great I don't know why I like it so much but I do keep going! |
| Shinzochi 2008-04-23 ch 4,  | abuseThat was HILARIOUS! I am REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY EAGER to read the next chapter. |
| Tetsu Deinonychus 2008-04-17 ch 4, | abuseWonderful update! I liked the way Marta loosened up a bit in this chapter! |
| emolsifier 2008-04-17 ch 4, | abuseamazing work! This is one vivid story. nice touch with the chimera team and marta. the behavior of the characters are spot on perfect, ed and al especially so. keep it up! I really want to see where the MartaXAl ship goes. |
| Bar-Ohki 2008-04-16 ch 4, | abuseO! I like it. |
| Lon Wolfgood 2008-04-16 ch 4, | abuseHahaha! Naughty Marta. :P I kind of feel sorry for Al. Kind of. |
| Tetsu Deinonychus 2008-04-05 ch 3, | abuseFantastic! Loved how in character everyone was, especially Ed getting caught off-guard just as he was lecturing Al about the same thing. The conversation between Al and Marta was the best part, though. |
| Bar-Ohki 2008-04-05 ch 3, | abuseAw! Al's so cute! |
| Lon Wolfgood 2008-04-05 ch 3, | abuseNow I feel all warm and fuzzy inside. |
| Tetsu Deinonychus 2008-04-01 ch 2, | abuseWonderful update! Ed's so shrewd in this chapter. And, I love the general flow of it all. Looking forward to more. |
| Bar-Ohki 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseNice! |
| Shinzochi 2008-03-28 ch 2, | abuseThat was AWESOME! ! ! ! I AM REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO READING THE NEXT CHAPTER. |
| Tetsu Deinonychus 2007-11-13 ch 1, | abuseWOW, this is fantastic! There's so precious few Al x Marta fics and this has the potential to be a great one! Everyone is nicely in character and this fits how things were at the end of the movie well. Please, don't keep us waiting too long for more. -_^ |
| Lon Wolfgood 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseWoot! Awesome! Very original. :) Keep it up! |
| D.J. 2007-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story, it really feels like FMA without the alchemy. And the Elrics meeting up with the real world equivalent of Greed and his group and hiring them is deliciously ironic. Thanks for writing, and I eagerly look forward to more. |