'You were the one who found me. In all that dirt, clutching a green glass star smeared with dirt and my blood.
You held me until all the medics came. You followed me to the hospital. You never let go of my hand.
You told me you love me.
Do you remember?'

Loved it, very sweet and beautifully written. Great job :)
xxoxx

nice work, fantastic oneshot...

damn i fell like crying when i read that! sorry it was sandle not slanders! hahass thats like simpsons! woohoo! go write somemore !!

Okay, I see how everyone's saying this is a pretty good fic and everything but this is fantastic. Beautiful, beautiful, I cried almost cried at the end. excellent, Excellent job. I've had to sift through alot of Sandle smut to find something like this. Great work.

That was pretty impressive! Love your style.

that was really good!!

I love it, it was wonderful! I love sandle and wow! I can't fault it, the star thing all through it was great I love it :D

Considering that I have given you a CC/review the other day, I have to say that this is pretty good. I still dislike Sandle immensely but it's not that bad. :)


-SA.

Great Fanfiction. I loved the simplicity of the form and the story; it expresses so much emotion in so few words. Needless to say; even when the language is not flowery, the sheer, raw emotion is further emphasized by its simplicity.

Good job, and this is only coming from a semi-CSI fan.

aw...sad. I liked the last part espiecially. even though i prefer GSR, i can still feel their love, and greg really really likes sarah.(though while sarah still has grissom, greg has no chance.)and i don't know hwy but the lines "It was raining. Do you remember?

You were the one who found me. In all that dirt, clutching a green glass star smeared with dirt and my blood." it really really tugged my heart. it was good. XD

omigosh! I'm not really one for CSI fics but yeah...it was really sweet and you better write more stories ok? ABUN SUPPORTS YOU!! Review mine kay? lol/...4 reviews in 24 hrs? haha :) HAPPY ACES!

Really cute story, I liked the way it was written! Made me a little misty eyed, haha :). Good job!

aww, I loved it. I think I almost cried. great!

Sweet! I loved the way you wrote the thoughts in between. Thanks for writing. *~*kay

Oh my, the end was cute ^^ just what I needed :)