aww, sweet! looking forward to the next one :)

:D MSC

what a cutesy ending! I kinda liked it, but hey you know my preferances by now, the more angst the better :D

Nice bit of innuendo at the begging LOL never goes a miss (ooh theres an idea for a short fic!)I also liked the Enigizer bunny and Bionic Man comments, I know simple things for simple minds. The medical stuff was really well explained too I wondered how you were gonna get Danny up and about again when the sarcophagus didn't re surface!

hehe you sure like your electrical stimulation lol I didn't see this coming, very clever :D

Loved the dialogue in this chapter between the three of them, but where is Teal'c? I know he was there, and I know he is a Jaffa of few words but none at all?

I so thought it was bomb!

Your so mean to Danny...I love it LOL. I love how Sam was beating her self up after shooting Daniel. I must admit it crossed my mind at the end of Chapter 1 if she would. And another cliff hanger at the end of a chapter, hows a girl supposed to resist?

Woah you paralized Danny! Thats taking whumpage to a whole new level, I guess we can expect the re appearance of the sarcophagus again then...or can we? Must read on...

Ooh what a great idea, why did we never get anything like this in the show, its so plausable. I love that it was the ever logical Sam who came up with this plan, even if it did originate from Jack lol

This was a great fic! It works really well as a self-contained story, and it has all the basic elements that make it very well structured. Everyone is in character, and every part of your plot was very plausible within the SG universe. Heck, even the GOULD were in character!

Awesome!

Rosie

very good story. i love the handicapped daniel. very original. i also liked the epilogue; a very cute way to end your story.

I loved this story! I'll have to read the next one.

I work with children. 5 crystals is nothing to a toy car. Kids (and Daniel) swallows the darnest things.

Not entirely sure why I didn't review this way back when. I very much enjoyed it. You did a great job with the medical aspects, and Daniel's adaptation, and naturally you whumped very proficiently and thoroughly. Poor Daniel. No wonder he cowers under a desk in that other fic. I would too.

Liked the S/D friendship you included. The characterizations were well done. Also liked that Daniel neither gets off too easy, nor is he stuck in a wheelchair forever. After all, we all want the boy to get some action in eventually. Not that kind, Tanya! Well, okay, yeah. Including that kind.

awesome story. glad things worked out kinda well for Daniel.