I love it when she asks him how far the tatoos go down his body.

Renji was very nicely in character here. So was Rukia. I like the level of description and the flow of the narritive. It was enough details to be hot and sexy to keep the pace going well without getting tripped up on purple prose. Great job!

“Renji, do you want to sleep with my brother?”

LOL great line.

How can you hate to write smut? You're actually not bad at it either, it was a good read :)

Love it

Haha, I dont see why you hate writing these, you're really good at it (if u take that as an insult, I'm sorry =( I meant it as a complament) Lotsa birthday fics but I gotta say, urs was the second best...I've always wondered the same thing abour Renji's tatoo's...though I wouldn't have sex with him to find out, i am curious. Nice job

Nice job, i liked it a lot !
i love this pairing. :]

Well done

cute.

I'm not sure if it's what you where aiming for, but this really made me smile and laugh at the end. It's really good, especially considering you don't like writing smut. Great work! x

O, i didn't know Rukia was so naughty. I love Renji!

Your story is amazing! I loved it! I need more smexiness!

Keep writing, your good.

i appreciate smut and I think you did a great job.

lol. I

OMG! This isn't smut! It's sex, but that doesn't make it smut! (It's like the rectangle/square thing.) And not only that, it's adorable! It's believeable! It's well-written! I love it!!

Not bad at all. You did a good job of describing things.

haha i'm glad you gave it a try. i don't usually like this couple but it seemed to work. great job!

aw...good story, really it was. put a little bit more detail and stuff into it next time, okay? but other than that, that was good ^^