Yes, Lucius' death words are along those lines.

Again, another good job. The Yellowcard lyrics were a nice touch. But, I think, again, for neatness, you could have put the lines from the song on top of each other, like this:

Let me light up the sky
Light it up for you

And perhaps you could go ahead and classify this as a songfic, if you want to.

And, one last detail. I'm very sure this was unintentional, but it would seem OOC of Raven to tell Priscilla to 'shut up' and heal Lucius. Even in such a tight situation, it seems unlikely. But, that's just me.

Again, I enjoyed this. Keep on writing for the love of writing. ^-^