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Vanyali
2008-04-18 . chapter 20
O. M. G.

I can't believe I haven't read this story until now O.o I'm slacking with checking for fanfics apparently... *shame* But as always I loved it and you are the bestest ever! =P *glomp*
midnights-dawn
2007-11-01 . chapter 20
I like, I like. Please Update Soon.
GinnyVos
2007-09-28 . chapter 20
Oh dear, I can't believe how long I've put off reading this. It's really shameful... *bows head*

Anyway, this is so cute and sweet and just... Sweet. I still can't think of it as Gojyo and Sanzo (sorry *ducks head*) but this is good writing... it's important to know the characters you're writing and you certainly do... Do you have the list of words for me? I'd really like to do something similar with some characters...
silver-eyed
2007-09-16 . chapter 11
haha, keep it up.
alanishoswald
2007-09-15 . chapter 20
Lovely once again. Love all the back and forth remarks they make to each other =)
SafireGriffon
2007-09-14 . chapter 20
Another great set of these--but I have to say that the most touching of these has to be the "friendship" moments. And of course I like the way they have their teasing and sarcastic comments going back and forth, even when they're trying to be romantic! :D Lots of love for all these.
jessicagreen
2007-09-14 . chapter 20
No words...excpet...perfect...
fullmetalfemme
2007-09-14 . chapter 20
She shoots! She scores! YAY BEFANINI!
Another great one!! I think my favorite of these so far was #14, Command. The juxtaposition of Gojyo recognizing how spiritual Sanzo really is deep down and how profoundly it affects him (and even the other two,) against Sanzo's musing on how Gojyo's command of his (Sanzo's) body is essential to his being all that he can be spiritually... It's very profound and very believable, as well. I also just love the little sniping comments back and forth - they take the piece to a whole other level of humor, keep it from any chance of EVER being boring or taking itself TOO seriously, even though some parts of it are quite moving. You always manage to find that balance in your writing, and I admire that.
kenihiko
2007-09-14 . chapter 20
aw such sweet chapters. they're all beautiful in the presentation. love them. ♥
kenihiko
2007-09-14 . chapter 11
hehehehe silly kappa. and happy priest. great little add. ^.^
Twilight's Shadow
2007-09-04 . chapter 10
Love it, love it, love it!! Mn, I just adore these stories! Amazing work, as usual! :D Wonderful!
GinnyVos
2007-09-03 . chapter 10
I read it finally! :D Cute! I'm looking forward to the next! (sorry for shortness but I'm dead)
silver-eyed
2007-09-03 . chapter 10
these are really good and so sweet!! sorry i didn't review each chapter but i finally got to this story and you were already on chapter 10 and i don't review every chapter when i read it all in one setting.

anyway, these are nice and simple and really enjoyable to read. keep it up, i look forward to the next themes/words that you have up!
jessicagreen
2007-08-31 . chapter 10
I love you. I really needed this. Thanks, update soon!
SafireGriffon
2007-08-30 . chapter 10
Oh, but I have missed your writing! These are so cute and fluffy...somehow I can't imagine that even a little Sanzo would put up with too much cuddling, though, Gojyo. ;) I like all the little asides to each other while they're trying to make these romantic speeches.

In case I haven't said it five million times, I absolutely love your interpretation of the boys. Can't wait to see the next update! :)
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