This is one of the best twilight poems i've read so far...good job! =)

wow! great poem!it was really fantastic! thanks x

THAT'S A CUTE POEM!! I LOVE IT!!

Nice poem! I love it! ^_^

i lik ur poem it really sweet :)

liked the poem a lot! very description. one note: the meter (number of syllables per line) is very off in some places (like in stanzas 1 and 4, for example).

But as i said, liked it a lot!

That's awesome how you were able to write that as a poem. For some reason I was expecting something else. o.0 Anyway, AWESOME! ^^ keep it up!

--Sailor Vela