Nice poem, Cal! I loved it! :)

Arodiel

This is great as always, Cal, such an important choice and you have presented it very well. Just a typo I saw: 'Wishing it could go own.' I guess it is supposed to be 'go on'. Anyway, I loved it and I missed your work while I was away ;)

Yeah, yeah... *can't resist the puppy eyes of doom.*

Anyways, this is really good! It gives off a bit of an air of repetition, but other than that, its brilliant! It captures the essence of the choice, which is mainly that we want what we can't have.