aw good ending/open adventure!

Nice... Very nice.

You know, a follow-up to this wouldn't be bad - if one could do that justice, of course.

clap clap clap clap that was fantastic keep up the great work ^_^

You created a SEQUEL to the LABYRINTH! I love you! That movie is one of my favorites and I was sad to see it end. Thanks for writing this story, it was a very fun thing to come across.
Best regards,
ebony.shade

although it sounds really bad, i think the ending is the best bit. it's really well written and perfectly ends the story. and toby is jus' so damn cute! :D

the other bit i love is the bit when Sarahs talking to herself after the bridge collapsed - i loved all the little memories and such.

it's be sweet to read a sequal of sorts *hint*hint* :P

toodles!

XxoxX

yeah!! this is great! well done.. I liked the way you ended it. Good job.. thanks

lol oh boy now what?

Aw, this last chapter, from Toby's POV, was absolutely adorable:D Great story... wish it was longer:P

What a beautiful ending. Once again I love the way you stay so true to the character. Your ending really makes me want to spend time like that with my little brother. I'm really too ** him and don't want him to look back only to remember how much he didn't like me. Thank you for the lovely story. I hope you will grace us with more.

...Wow. That was seriously one of the best epilogues I've ever read. I love how you put it in Toby's point of view and let us see how Jareth and Sarah were doing that way.

I really enjoyed the plot of the fic - it was pretty original, no over-emo-drama stuff or inner court workings that one usually gets. I also liked the personality of the labyrinth. :)

"He wasn’t sure what he would lose, precisely, but he hated losing, and so he would not."

I love that line. I think it's very defining of Jareth's personality. I just thought I'd make that note.

Oh yeah - here I am, reading yet another of your stories. =D

"He still vowed to annihilate whoever had sent that hideous impersonation."

Hehe. I like the way they met. I look forward to reading the rest of this when I have more time. Now, I must sleep, but the mini-intro looked so interesting I had to take a peek at the first chapter!

Brilliant! I loved it!

That was great!
I'm so happy that Jared and Sarah finally got together!
Because it definitely took them long enough! :)
It was really cute seeing this chapter through Toby's point of view and I love how much he cares for his sister!
Overall, this was an amazing story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :D

YAY!
She's magical!
That is so great!
Now she'll be connected to the labyrinth (and more importantly, Jareth) forever! ^.^

I loved the comedy corner!
The voodoo doll part was hilarious! XD