 Forever In The Fire 12/23/07 . chapter 4Really good.I wounder who's trying to kill Homer this time. I would think that Gerrys, getting someone to attemp to kill homer to get Maggie near him, and then kill Maggie. Just a crazy thought. |
 Pixel Devil 10/24/07 . chapter 4Great story! i liked the plot very much please update soon!
although i really think its flanders getting revenge on homer
or maybe flander's sons |
 101-ways2kill-kenny 9/23/07 . chapter 4me likey write more |
 Spidey3000 9/16/07 . chapter 4Good story...but make it funnier. |
 Vaporeon-Chan 9/3/07 . chapter 3Alright then if its petty revenge then lets make this interesting shall we? If I might make a suggestion.
I'm not sure if you have played Metal Gear Solid or not. If you have. I would suggest making this person out to get Homer. Umm Revolver Ocelot from Metal Gear Solid.
If you haven't. Then how about Peter Griffin? Family Guy is great in small doses.
*Family Guy and Simpsons Fan*
I'm merely giving you a suggestion. *Notes that Marge is extremely annoying and blue haired*
I mean do you even know what her hair looks like?
Oh well aside from her The Simpsons is awesome.
Good story. You rock. Keep it up. *Gives a napkin for suggestions*
I used to Roleplay greatly. Thats how my writing got better. I don't write in Roleplay format. I write in writing format.
Reeses Pieces Yo!
Vaporeon-Chan |
 Vaporeon-Chan 9/1/07 . chapter 2Good story more so awesomeo.
I wonder who wants to kill Homer? Someone did attempt to kill him once and it was Frank Grimes Jr.
Although this one seems more serious then petty revenge.
Vaporeon-Chan |
 Vaporeon-Chan 8/31/07 . chapter 1Hi. Absolutely stupendous story.
Hmm...Me wonders something.
Keep on writing,
The Mysterious Vaporeon-Chan
P.S. I'm going to have a story up in this section. Please check it out when its up. I'm calling it.
Chaos Ensues |
 vegiekitty 8/31/07 . chapter 1Wow, I think I need more.
I wanna be Maggie! |