How do you write the storys because my cousin wants to know

keep up the good work

well minus the whole close to drowning thing...can I have a b-day like this...my day is just around the corner!

I read your profile and saw that you hated spelling errors, so I thought I'd point out a verb tense problem. "There is a lake at the beginning of the park, and Kagome walks by it to get home. Shiko was sulking as she dragged him away from his new friend." The first sentence is in present tense, while the second is in the past. The story is cute, so don't take this the wrong way, but Sesshomaru seems OOC. Never-the-less, your story makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside, so I like it! ^_^

Too cute.

And pretty darn well written, too.

Good job.

Artee

Naw, that was so cute! I'm usually not a big fan of one-shots, but this one was certainly among one of the better ones I've read. I really liked it. Shows how much I'm a sucker for romance. Or whatever.
... so cute... gah!

Its a cute stpry ^w^ I love it

Great one-shot keep up the good work. :)

what a wonderful birthday present! i mean come on! who wouldnt want either inuyasha or sesshomaru for their birthday? i mean come on... those two are so hot. combine them and get the perfect man... dog... demon... um... i dont know.

BYE!

aw. i would keep going but My life is catching up to me! fabulous

WOOT WOOT! YEAH THAT WAS THE BEST ONE SHOT I'VE EVER READ! WOOT WOOT YEA! U KEEP IT UP! TAT WAS AWESOME AND I LOVE THE DOGGIES! :3

I like the story, it's really sweet.

i like this story the ending funny when sango passes out

Not my favorite pairing but I really enjoyed this story none the less!

cute