|Reviews for The Price of the Future|
| NamidaNoNozomi 9/5/07 . chapter 7
This is a new flare on an old theme and very nicely written. I just hope your muse doesn’t leave before the story is finished (knock on wood). Will you be doing any pairings or strange plot twists, like the yondaime is Naruto’s father or something AU like that? Please keep updating when you can; I really like you writing style.
| dragonwarlord 9/3/07 . chapter 6
Ok but a little unrealistic where 'kashi is concerned no way he would let something like naru knowing his anbu designation down no mater his feelings on the matter hope you continue.
| darksone 9/3/07 . chapter 6
you know you could have include that he knew that arashi was he father and that he have the last of her mother just so you know.
but the chapt was greate jane and G.L.
| Ryoko of the Ink 9/3/07 . chapter 6
It's funny ( in my opinion) to see Naruto flash from hokage mode to dobe mode. To everyone else it must seem like he's bi-polar. All in all another good chapter.
| Reidluver 9/3/07 . chapter 6
I take it that you don't like Kakashi? Anyway, I'm guessing that Naruto moving so fast was his father's special jutsu? Can't wait for an update.
| Reidluver 9/3/07 . chapter 5
I think the part about the seal was okay. Poor Naruto, all those nightmares!
| Reidluver 9/3/07 . chapter 4
NO! Gaara! My sweet Gaara!
| Reidluver 9/3/07 . chapter 3
This is a nice change, having Naruto and Sasuke being really nice to each other. Nah, you're not getting too much OOC, because they are really like, 21 year olds or so in a 12 year old body. Of course they'll act different.
| Reidluver 9/3/07 . chapter 2
Cool. I like how they refer to Kyubbi as Fuzzy and Furball. Nice job on Kakashi's hair as well, by the way.
| Reidluver 9/3/07 . chapter 1
So, I'm guessing they're going back in time? Cool; usually it's just Naruto or Naruto and Gaara. I like how Sasuke is in on it.
| Ryoko of the Ink 9/3/07 . chapter 5
Yay another chapter! My mind went through a mixture of emotions...
At the beginning: OH NO GARRA
In the middle: LOL Emo-chan
At the end: NO IKURA
So yea...heh heh. The only way I would critique your story is that you should try to be a bit more descriptive. I find that it helps increase chapter legnth and draws more people in. Good luck with school.
-Haley AKA Ryoko of the Ink
| PsychoLeopard 9/3/07 . chapter 5
Still looking good. I'm impressed with your updating schedule, to be honest. Keep up the good work!
| kokoro 9/3/07 . chapter 5
woah... i like this fic... i was apprehensive about whether i should even click on it... but it turned out to e good! but.. PLEASE PLEASE dont go through the whole naruto series with excruxiating detail! or if you do.. pls actually finish this story! so many back to the past(ha.. almost typed future!) fics... and none.. i think... ever completed -_-
| Ryoko of the Ink 9/2/07 . chapter 4
Your story draws me in. I only hope that you continue it and finish. Your plot leaves me wondering and I can't wait to read more.
| PsychoLeopard 9/1/07 . chapter 2
Based on your second chapter, I think it looks good. As you are aware, the idea has been done a lot, but if you can keep it going past the chuunin exams I think you'll set a record. This chapter was light-hearted with hints of something else. I like the humor and the relationship you've got going between Sasuke and Naruto. The prank was quite creative. Well-written and error-free. Great job. Please continue!