wow, great job.

That was quite lovely. I enjoyed that very much.

"Better to be ignorant and happy with his bride then to know her affections weren’t completely his."
That line is absolutely beautiful, and probably the only thing I'll remember about this piece, but it quite exquisite just the same.

I don't give pleasant reviews - well, almost ever. Hooray for you. :)

Squeak.

Oeh very nice!
I like the way you played out Bella's rather obsessive devotion to the Dark Lord. Very very good :p I loved it
AND you have a great way of writing -telling- Roddo's thoughts and doubts, making them sound as if you are in his head, hearing him think. Thumbs up ^_^

I liked it, nicely dark and a little angsty. Rodolphous has to be one of my favourite characters despite playing a very minor role and being a bit of a sadist. I love reading about the Bella/Dolph relationship.

Nicely characterised. An all-around bloody good story.