It was great. I liked it...alot!

i loved it! keep up the good work! =D

Nice one-shot. I love the pairing. It was well written as well and made a lot of sense.

Awesome story! But, by the way, who does Naruto get? Just curious!

That was a really sweet ending line.
And you say you can't write fluff...liar. That was one of the fluffiest stories ever, and I loved it. ShikaTem is one of my favorite pairings. You should write about their marriage, that would be funny :D.
~Ari

awh! Great job on this one shot, I loved it! ^-^
-gives you a cookie for your great story-

YEAH! I LOVED IT AND I LAUGHED A LOT!! Especially at the slight Kankurou bashing (i love that crap XD) and at the part where Temari just blurted out if she looked fat. It was so cute too! THANKIES!!

*twitches...er make that spasms*