What a tremendous, amazing, adventure you took us on. I really enjoyed it. Sure the ARs are confusing but I think your guides helped and the details you created for each AR made them unique and wonderful.

*sigh* hurt Stephen(s) and with Abby(s) what more could a girl ask for :-D Oh yeah those lucious views of Abby's when Stephen was only in a towel *sigh* and *yumm* and *pounce* :-)

I've spent the last week reading through the FFN Primeval section, after watching all the episodes the previous week (thank goodness for Netflix). This is handsdown one of the top few stories in the Primeval Fandom. Great job. Wish you'd write us a little more Stephen, he may be gone on the show but like Jimmy Carter I lust in my mind for him :-D

Well, that took longer than i'd hoped. I never want to see another exam for the rest of my life. Which may be tricky since there's a load scheduled all next week. Damn and blast.

I think this is one of my most favourite (at the risk of sounding about 5) stories ever. One thing I will say is that all the Stephens and Abbys did get very confusing. And you know when you talk about Abby in the plural? There is no apostrophe - or have I already told you that?

Plotwise, absolutely delightful. You run very smoothely, and the capitalisation works to help keep the confusion to a minimun, though I will admit to having to re-read on more than one occasion. Unfortunately, I cannot think of any suggestions to make it less so. The end as well, is a little confusing, hough I think I understand it now, but it took several tries.

I do like the way you work with multiple Stephens (I'm moving to Time and Distance now), because you make it really, truly interesting.

However, even though it is a little hard to keep track of and there are several wayward apostrophes, I love it (again)! You really are an amazing writer!!

hi im still with the story.have you been making this up or was it plotted out eithr way the storylines are great.im still writing my story

o whats goin to happen

this story is really gud did u do any other primeval or conby stories

like i thought lost used to be confusing but this wow what a twist but i followed it fine

Ah! That was a great ending! The whole story was awesome!

I love this story...up to chapter 22, but it's really good! 2 Abbys and 2 Stephens...that's so funny!

Wow...this story is great! It's a little confusing, but still very good, can't wait to read the rest!

Hi, I've just finished reading Hard Light, and wanted to let you know that I enjoyed it very much.

One minor thing that I thought could be improved is that it would have benefited from the services of a beta to pick up on stuff such as misplaced apostrophes (you did tend to include them in plurals - apostrophes shouldn't be used to denote plurals, just possessives - excluding its - and abbreviations) and the odd misspelling or typo. These things can be distracting to the reader. I recall that you have a presence on LJ, as a comment of yours is what led me to this fic - I noticed a beta community was listed when I was doing a search for' primeval' on LJ, so it might be worth checking it out.

Having said that, your story was compelling enough to keep me hooked (despite my punctuation-nazi tendencies!) and your writing excellent. I hope you don't mind the criticism - I feel that your writing is good enough that you take it seriously enough to accept constructive criticism aimed at helping you to make it even better.

Anyway, thanks for the fic, and I hope to read more of your stuff :)

Ali

seriously confusing, but still brilliant. That's quite a talent!! shame it's over, well one :-)

I'm about halfway through your story and just had to stop and tell you that I'm having such fun reading this. Love it.

Wow! *head spins in all directions at once*

Phew. I'm actually glad thats over! Even though i loved reading it.

Cant wait for you to post more on it though,love to find out what happens to them all!

Wonderful writing!

Suzi

I just read the last three chapters and thought they were amazing! 10/10! It does make it easier to tell which Stephen and Abby is which with the no/capitals.

Keep updating! Im addicted to this fan fic

What a great opening chapter. You're quite a talented writer. =)