This was so adorable!

I hope you do some more cute kidDerek and kidCasey!

Made me laugh so much my jaw is literally hurting!

I laughed, six yr olds are funny as ever. The ending too with the 'sermony' was funny.

I did think it was sweet when Derek said that he would catch Casey before she fell. Very sweet.

I loved it!:P

They were so cute...

It was SO cute! I LOVED it!

it was so so cute! i loved it!

Aw, that was great!

really cute story! I really liked it. Oh, and just so you know, Derek failed a grade so he'd more than likely be a year older than Casey, but I get why you might of changed that to make the twin thing work out!

that was so cute!

AWW THIS WAS SOO INCREDIBLY ADORABLE!

lol that was so cute!

That was really cute! You should do a follow up story, where Derek and Casey are together and remembering this. Great job!

Hey! I got your PM. I thought that I would go ahead and check out the first chap of both of the stories. I saw that one was a one-shot, so here I am, reviewing it.

It was the absolute cutest thing I've ever read. My heart flipped and did an AW! Even though I really don't like kids all too much, kid moments like this make me fuzzy. I half expected Casey to wake up in the middle of the night in a cold sweat saying "What the HELL was that?" But she didn't, so you surprised me.

I have to get off the comp. right now, so you can expect a review from me on your other story sometime this week or weekend. Sorry I can't do it right now!

I loved this little tidbit, and I'm glad you posted the thought on this site! _

excellent! keep it up!

K

lol, that was cute.

omg! that was so cute!

i couldnt stop laughing! haha.

"i pooped" was hilarious. D