I think this story was falsely advertized. You said that all of the adults were killed by a mysterious plaque (not from the corn), but I see that the corn HAD something to do with it, with Micah saying it was His will. I will probably read the rest of this, but I really am not that interested. It doesn't really catch my attention. Even so, the story looks great, but just little things along the way bring it down, especially His daughter. How...? Ah, but I have to read the rest to find out.
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Mandy 12/10/01 . chapter 8
I thought that this was a really good story but what happens next? I would really like to know.
Rachael 12/2/01 . chapter 8
Here i am, finally reviewing. Anyway, Thanks again for including me in the story, i love Jed! Um, like i said before, well written, and everything like that! you know yuou're a good authoress, so i don't have to tell you again!
Meagan too lazy to sign in 8/30/01 . chapter 6
Bwa ha! I like. *whine* I want to be in the story toooo! ...heh, just kidding. I'm waiting for more, and hoping that there's no more writer's block - for either of us! Oh, yeah. MICAH IS MINE AND I LOVE HIM DEARLY! _ ...I'm done now.