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Left Hook 2008-07-04 ch 14,	abuseoh man, really enjoying this! You're clearly having fun twisting all the phrases and situations from the originals, and it's awesome. Also I loved Luke's first space flight, and the unbearable awkwardness with Leia/Anakin/Luke :)
GoldenRat 2008-07-04 ch 14,	abuseNice as it is to read Vadar and Obi-Wan working together again. I'm really looking forward to Vadar's response to the actions of Anakin and Luke.
Forgotten Lake 2008-06-26 ch 14,	abuseThis story is excellent. I love the addition of a clone Anakin, the fact that the emperor is dead, that Vader is, well, acting a lot less evil with him gone, that Luke and Leia are there, as well as Obi wan. You've done a great job bringing them together realistically, along with writing a great story! Good luck with your writing! ~FL
Lord Archeron 2008-06-26 ch 14,	abuseThis story is amazing. Anakin is good, Luke is good, Vader is definitly going to be turned back to the Light Side... hopefully. I hope nothing happens to Anakin and Luke, they are really close. The story is amazing. Update soon please!
LadyZ 2008-06-26 ch 14, anon.	abuseIt is such a charming story, I love it so well. I just hope it will end well for everyone :-)
Jazzyone 2008-06-25 ch 14,	abuseMan o man...why did it have to stop...? wah! I wish this was a finished novel so I could go on reading. It is so good, I love love love it. Can't wait for the next chapter and I loved the descriptions of the bit of battle going on. The interaction and exchanges are awesome as usual! Keep up the good work and Update as soon as possible!! Great job! Jazz
pronker 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseNaturally enough, it's good and supremely satisfying to see Vader acting like Anakin was, in partnership with Obi-Wan once more. Luke and Anakin are getting compared better and better, now that we see them in action together; Anakin's thinking of Luke as his guiding beacon I particularly enjoyed.
Ann Jinn 2008-06-25 ch 14,	abuseThis is getting more exciting. So great to see Obi Wan with Anakin and Luke & young Anakin. Good sense of humor.
general-joseph-dickson 2008-06-25 ch 14,	abuseJust like the Clone Wars...except for the metal suit...and the giant mechanical planet with the big gun.
life on rewind 2008-06-25 ch 14,	abusegreat plot, and great cliffhangers, i must say :D hoping you update soon ^_^
Balance in the Dark 2008-06-25 ch 14,	abuseI like this story but I don't know about Vader's character in this last chapter. He seems less like Vader and more like he did before the mask and suit...reckless, going in without a plan...it's not very like Vader. I have always viewed Vader as being in control and this is too much like the boy he was. I like this story because we get Luke Vader and Anikin all at once I'm not sure I like Vader also becoming so much like Anikin again. BITD
ILDV 2008-06-25 ch 14,	abuseSO COOL. SO Amazing. SO Wonderful. When Leia discovers of being be separated from her twin brother, also, I hope that she gets angry A LOT indeed. Anakin will get angry a lot indeed. Poor Anakin. He and Luke survives, it's true? Please more update soon soon soon soon soon.
Hamilcar 2008-06-25 ch 14,	abusehearts the 501st Really enjoyed this chapters. Anakin's anxiety over flying was well portrayed and I thought the descriptions in general of what it would be like to fly in a TIE fighter were quite well done. :) And the slow progress of Vader and Obi-Wan to the inner sanctum was nicely handled as well - good pacing but still suspenseful. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Aximilli2 2008-06-19 ch 13,	abuseBit of a question for Vader. How does he know Anakin is dead in the vision and not just in a come or something?
Fukiko-chan 2008-06-13 ch 13,	abuseExcellent story! Can't wait to read more. I really love the interactions between Luke and Anakin.

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