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| LuvAngel448 2008-06-11 ch 10, | abuseThis is a great story! Please update soon! |
| Tennischica 2008-06-10 ch 10, | abuseoh come on you have kept your readers waiting for months and that is all u write that is just sad hurry up and bring Trevor and Frank home so denise and roxy are happy and let claudia Joy see the bar to |
| Tennischica 2008-06-10 ch 8, | abuseWould you hurry up and write some more chapters I wanna see trevor and Frank come home |
| Tennischica 2008-04-13 ch 9, | abuseHey I love your story I was wondering does trevor and frank know what happend? |
| bjames238 2008-04-11 ch 9, | abusei love this so much! its been so long since the season finale and you're story definitely makes me miss that show!! great job! |
| CharmedPeacekeeper 2007-09-23 ch 9, | abuseHey! Sorry it's taken me a few days to review...I've been SO busy. It's getting better and better. Keep it up! |
| Of Elfin Blood 2007-09-18 ch 3, | abusehaledol is an antipsycotic a more appropriate sedative would be ativan if they want her completly out tyr propfol |
| CharmedPeacekeeper 2007-09-10 ch 7, | abuseI love it still!! Update soon! |
| girlinterrupted22 2007-09-10 ch 7, | abusethat's not it, is it? there will be more? very nice. |
| girlinterrupted22 2007-09-06 ch 6, | abusegood stuff. hmm...i wonder what she'll do with the bar? update soon! |
| CharmedPeacekeeper 2007-09-05 ch 6, | abuseLove it. Please update soon. |
| CharmedPeacekeeper 2007-09-04 ch 5, | abuseCP's back with love for your story! Please update soon...I'm sure that we'd all appreciate longer chapters, too...but you're the writer, and I love the story. |
| Lauren- Natosha 2007-09-04 ch 4, | abuseI like your story, but why oh why did Roland have to bite the bullet and poor Amanda. I love chapter 4. I can actually see this scene happening on screen. Please give us more. |
| furbypksfurby 2007-09-03 ch 4, | abuseLove the sentiment... very touching. I am a little sad that Roland had to be the one killed in this story... as he is one of my favorite characters of the show. But I like the way that you handled the sitiuations... please keep writing |
| airbear23 2007-09-03 ch 4, | abuseI think you've really displayed the chaos and emotions following the explosion, as well as having a grasp on the characters themselves. I hope it doesn't actually turn out like this on the show, but great story! |