the song is actually called 'sick cycle carousel'.

What you have written is really really good- but chapter 2-5 is the same thing . . .

write more its so sad i want to see where this goes

Before I can properly R&R this story, you need to fix a few things. Your summary says that this is a story about Logan going through the six phases of grief. I'm going to assume that your intention is to devote a chapter to each phase, but so far you've only got 2 chapters up. The story's stats say that you have 5 chapters up, but in actuality the 2nd chapter, "Denial", has been posted 4 times. When you have everything straightened out, I'll see about giving this story another go, but I can't guarantee that my review won't be without some constructive criticism.