|Reviews for A New beginning|
| Kail 4/23/13 . chapter 28
Please write more ! I love the story and I can't wait to see how it will end !
| cam 4/23/13 . chapter 1
Hey I loved reading your story.. Your style and your characters improved a lot and I hope you are going to write and ending to this beautiful story. It would be a pity to just leave it like that!. Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to see how the story develops x
| Guest 3/24/13 . chapter 1
Please write chapter 29 :)
| Ledger.Lines 12/18/12 . chapter 28
I absolutely love this story and the events you've chosen to take place! Brava on having wonderful, marvelous ideas! Overall your sentence structure could use some work, and if I were you I would try and use some varying word choices. Just a few things to think about. If you were ever to need a beta reader/editor I'm all yours! :)
| The Broken Ghost 12/17/12 . chapter 28
This is story is beautiful not a moment through out did I feel the least bit bored, in fact I was rather surprised that I read almost the entire thing in one sitting. Though sadly it was getting late so I had to stop. :')
Your interpritation of the Doctor is wonderful to see you clearly show flashes of him as we would see him react in either the books or films, along with your own take on him truelly makes this story gripping and exciting. I love the romantic/fatherly role between Gabrielle and The Good Doctor you never make their meetings practiable and certainly know when to take a sharp turn.
I look forward to a new chapter when you have the time to post one up, keep up this excellent work you should be very proud of your writing skills. :)
| hermonine 12/12/12 . chapter 28
Great story. Keep up the great work and update soon!
| Maxine I love Erik 11/17/12 . chapter 28
Yay! More story to read! More please! I love it!
| YourEnchantingDesire 11/12/12 . chapter 28
This is getting more and more Interesting. So is there going to be a romance between Hannibal and Gabrielle? If so, when will it happen? Will Hannibal really let her leave him? Or will he let her go and they never see each other again?
| princess moon shadow 11/12/12 . chapter 28
| wishingformore 9/6/12 . chapter 1
I don't even know if you're on this site anymore and/or still writing. But I dearly love this fic and would send you love every single day for the rest of the my life. That's an exaggeration, but seriously. I know it's been over a year, almost two soon, but all would be forgiven if you just started up again. If you read this, please don't trouble yourself to reply, just start the next chapter.
| Maxine I love Erik 2/22/12 . chapter 27
I can't wait for more to come! To be honest I like seeing the more human side of him that you bring out. but I know what he is think about since the time they played tag. lol! Please post as soon as you can.
| starguitar15 12/13/11 . chapter 27
OH MY GOD! okay there is SOOOOOO much i want to say. i started reading your story and i didnt wanna review until i got to the last chapter you had. this could be one of the better stories ive read recently. okay well im not going to send a flamer because thats undeniably rude. there are QUITE a few spelling/gramatical errors throughout the chapters that i would recomend fixing in later chapters. they arent a huge deal but it makes you look more profesional when you dont make some simple errors also. i really like where this is going. i just wish it was a romance so that Gabrielle and Lecter could get together. and i wish he was younger.. ugg. but i can honestly say i love how you characterize doctor lecter. and i understand this is part of imagery and such but could you like.. how can i decribe it.. not go into soooo much detail on gabrielles clothing and makeup? for the parts at the clubs its better but for everyday situations could you please cut down a little? OH and i dont know if you know about POVS (point of view)(im assuming you do since you have been on here for awhile) but could you use them more often? things sometimes get confusing and it would be really helpful. i do love your story though so i hope i dont offend you. UPDATE PLEASE!
| tkr 11/21/11 . chapter 27
please write happens the next day?
| Daelyah the Dark Rose 11/19/11 . chapter 27
Dear god, I'm in LOVE with this fic! _
Personally, I wish Hannibal will do away with Victor, and Gabrielle eventually ends up as Hannibal's; but, you're the writer, here (still, just felt like saying something ;p)...
Please update when you can, friend; this has been an AMAZING story, and I just can't get enough!
| Twisted Love Stories 7/23/11 . chapter 27
I hope you finish this. It's a great concept.