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Kyuun
2009-06-02 . chapter 2
this story is amazing! I love it! This fic just made DaiXKrad my favorite pairing next to DaiXDark!X3
Dreedle007
2009-05-09 . chapter 4
WOW! this is so amazing
i really love it
the way you right gives great details
i want to read more so please continue^^
DarkBombayAngel
2009-05-07 . chapter 5
Wow. Update soon please.
MightyMaeve
2009-04-30 . chapter 5
You are so cute! I love your author afterwords; they remind me of the ones included in the mangas by a few of my favourite mangakas. No need to apologize for 'no plot.' Within each and every chapter, you have mangaged to create in me interest, commitment and care for your characters. I connected. I don't like '**' per se, because it feels so flat and disjointed and no emotional reaction other than boredom is created in me. Your story here rose above that with your powerful wording of description and dialogue and emotions.

I really like how Krad went from angry and completely self obsessed in his own pleasure to gradually realizing he cared about Daisuke's pleasure...without getting saccharine!

From this:
"Pitiless amber eyes watched as the boy at his feet carried out the distasteful task, stripping him of the last of his human dignity, reducing his worth to nothing more than an animal he could abuse to satisfy his insatiable and depraved lust."
To this hidden care:
"It hurts," Daisuke whimpered pitifully. Krad regarded him with a masked expression, but his eyes betrayed his concern."

You are great at 'showing,' not 'telling.'

My favourite bits:
"Daisuke shuddered and gasped at the artful ministrations, but otherwise remained still. He was numbing himself from the unsolicited invasion, his body reacting to the pleasure, but his mind shut off, floating in comforting darkness." It's such a fascinating mix of 'force' and 'want.' When is rape, when is consentual. VERY amazing - the way you described such angonizing conflict. And passionately erotic to me!

"Before he could protest, Krad silenced him with a hard kiss, cold, bruising and dispassionate. With a frightened squeak, Daisuke pulled away – a stinging slap landed across his cheek, triggering a shameful flow of tears." *sigh
xXxSmidgexXx
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
otensible? whats dat mean XD
DarkBombayAngel
2009-03-17 . chapter 4
Very good.
Hyper-active Neko-chan
2009-02-15 . chapter 5
Update soon, dammit! You left me drooling and wanting more! *realizes what she said* Damn, that is just... I've said too much! Update!
Tsuki the Ryuujin no Miko
2009-01-31 . chapter 5
um wow. update son please.
JtheChosen1
2009-01-03 . chapter 5
very good work! can't wait to see how this ends!
inperfection
2009-01-03 . chapter 5
I liked this chapter it was sweet =D
Near Ninyoto
2008-11-10 . chapter 4
please finish the story. Its killing me, its like i have to read the rest. So i beg you please finish
~thank you, Nekka
EvilAngelofHeavenandHell
2008-09-26 . chapter 2
this was unexpected, but tender and I liked it, it just showed that Krad was still a human soul in some way more than others, but he's still a demon lost in the deep fires of hell, and for that he shall walk the desert of temptation.

I love DaiKrad. I love sadistic Krad. I think I'm just starting to love this, but I'll stop here for today, since I know that you're not a quick updater, I'll always be behind by two chapters. XD NO REVIEWS UNTIL THEN! :66:
EvilAngelofHeavenandHell
2008-09-26 . chapter 1
What in the hell is wrong with you people, why in the hell do you insist on writting such sinful things, this is disgusting yet at the same time I'm just kidding. Now if you wouldn't mind, I really loved this, I just like starting out most of the good stories with a role playing act such as the christian critique.
The Masquerade Moth
2008-09-12 . chapter 4
Oh this is good ^_^

It.. sorta has a plot... *cough cough*

Well, if you have an imagination, it has a plot XD
inperfection
2008-08-28 . chapter 4
Great story..can't wait for an update
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