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allieboo2u
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
hm intresting but i thought the ending was a little cheesy...but i still liked it
Rory Girl
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
that was so sweet! i loved it !
sweetcherry369
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
Nice!
candyluver
2008-05-04 . chapter 1
wow. its prett sad. but love the story!
SMOKe13
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
aw thats so cute! you should totally write a sequal to this! i mean that would be amazing! i really liked the sexual part too but i didn't really understand when he said that he might die and she might die and she asked do you want me to and he said more than anything. is he asking her to die or is he switiching subjects to get her to not wait for him? well i really enjoy it can't wait to read more!!
.Poisoned.Butterfly.
2008-03-09 . chapter 1
KYA~!!
Miss perverted Saku-chan here! x3

Great job on this! I was like O//O when I read this, but it's an awesome story!
You're awesome at writing, you know? =3
Keep up the awesome work~! =D

~Saku-chan~
sasusakufan15
2008-03-05 . chapter 1
I loved it! It was perfect!
Jasmine
2008-01-26 . chapter 1
POIFECT!ALL YOUR STORIES ARE POIFECT!yOU'RE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR.YAY!I'M JUST SO GLAD YOU HAVE MORE STORIES.=D
madaraxsharingan
2008-01-03 . chapter 1
that was so cool!
this is the second story i've read that was written by you.
The other one is Return of the Uchiha. When are you gonna finish in?? =D
I think you made one little mistake in this story thoug...
in the morning when they wake up, sasuke says:
"They may or they may not. Sakura I could die, you could die.”
then sakura says do you want me to (as in to die?)
and sasuke answers 'more than anything'
Im confused about that...
but a really sweet good story!
I loved it!
Mwah!!
=D
FrustrationNeverLetsGo
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
Ah! This was great, loved it.

x]
uchiha-sasuke-lover
2007-11-04 . chapter 1
i would say that you do a sequel for this one shot another oneshot...-uchiha-sasuke-lover-...^^
SasuSaku 4 eva
2007-09-28 . chapter 1
Thats the most beutifull Oneshot ever. What a great idea but please do a sequel i do hate non happy endings.
lalagirl555x
2007-09-27 . chapter 1
aw! this is so cute and kind of sad! pleas sequel sequel sequel!

lalagirl
Fullmetal komusume
2007-09-08 . chapter 1
wow! I hope he realy does live with her one day!
AkatsukiDEMONangel
2007-09-07 . chapter 1
OMG! I love it!
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