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| Bobby Corwen 2007-12-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like reading pre-fanfictions of important non-playable characters because they fill the void of the main characters in FFXII. You made Zecht's pre-game story so real, like it really happened to him before the commence of FFXII. You just made Zecht or Reddas so him, Zecht was always running from something. The only escape was death, so if you can't beat them, why not join them. Also it shows more of Cid's sinister character, and his view of Zecht or Reddas. I also liked the way Zecht left the Judge Magisters, it's also to me, the most realistic way to leave and tell no one. |
| Talim-Hime 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseNice - haven't seen many Zecht/Reddas pre game stories, so I liked this. Haunted people fics are great -- and Cid was great to read. Good work. |
| Crimson Kaoru 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseWhat a beautiful piece! More should have been done with Reddas in-game, I think, even though we got a good bit of him. |
| Zaz9-zaa0 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseAn exquisitly haunting, satisfying piece... :) |