I liked the first four lines, and the last two. Good job!
- Gaby

that is such an awesome poem! I like it a lot more than mine. But mine was just that part in the movie before he died.
This is soo good!

I like your poem.

Great poem, but:

'A Halfling from the Shire had arisen

For him nine companions were chosen.'

Frodo travelled with eight companions. He was the ninth.
Apart from that mistake, it was wonderful.

Very good!

Have you read the books? Do you know about the visions? Or that Boromir went only to solve the riddle? Just curious...

Anyway, this really is good. Archiving this at my C2!


ps

Is the last line supposed to be way over on the left like that, or was it a formatting problem? Holler if you need help, k? I'm very approachable.

that was, in one word, amazing.
l8er
.:Nikos:. and ~Atlanta~ and ^Hector-the-wheelchair^

AWesome poem love it :)