Lovely story, with a smooth, poetic flow and deep, sad tone.

This is so bittersweet. I love it.:D

I really liked this because life really isn't all about happy endings. I also liked how it was split up between past and present happenings- especially considering how it all tied in.

Well done!

I love your ending; the addition of the conversation between Sakura and unknown-not-important-man while Sasuke overhears several tables away was an excellent addition. Ah, angst.

aww that was really angsty. i really like it.

Sad. Cute. Sad. *Cries* OMC! I am STILL thinking about that stupid (WHAT THE HELL! IT'S NOT STUPID! SHUT UP!) movie...

Sorry.. i tend to.. um. talk to myself. It's worse in person..

Ta! XP

wow...this is beautiful...and in a way, she hasn't been kissed. She is the one who kissed, but it wasn't truly a kiss...more of a way of letting go and moving on.

...something sasuke might regret later.

I loved it! It shoulda been a story XD

sweet. (:

i love it. (:

wa you make really sad things happen to Sakura but I love it

I'm really sorry I'm on like a coke/caffine/sugar/staring at a lot of hot guys high right now "

god i love this story so much! great work!

hm ... i like this one ... but it seems as if it changes scenes to places i don't know where it is going off to ... but it was well written all the same

It's beautiful. The scenes that interject (the italicized text) - not entirely necessary, but they only emphasize the atmosphere of the story, and it's - absolutely gorgeous. I actually don't feel like it's too angsty, but it's gloriously well-written, basically perfect grammar, and *wonderful*. I loved it to bits.

I dont understand.

But if it has somthing to do with Greys then i wouldnt.

I didnt watch it, but it was good even if I didnt get it

Gorgeously IC.

Sounds like something that might actually happen in the manga.

Love the conversation snippets as well!

Its just so.. IC. Most IC Sasusaku fic I've ever read, I think. Angsty, but somehow makes you long for more.

Much love.