|Reviews for The Silvanimus|
| gojyo-lover20 5/13/13 . chapter 9
Why is this rated M? I don't think it should even be rated 's a good story though although it ended so soon.
| Mireya Humbolt 8/31/12 . chapter 10
Flicidades fic, fantastico
| Guest 8/8/12 . chapter 10
This is fantastic! Although I do wish for a sequel...I know you wouldn't be able to use the exact plots from the books..but maybe twist them around a bit to involve Snape & the Protectors more with Harry trying to stay out of it? Perhaps Quirrell or someone goes directly after Snape b/c he had refused to join Voldemort and is now caring for the Boy-Who-Lived? He could be comatose or something and Harry has to handle Dumbledore on his own for awhile? It would be interesting to see how Sirius reacted to his Godson's apprenticeship and sorting. :)
| Griffin Raven 7/18/12 . chapter 10
I throughly enjoyed this short story...but I do wish that more little titbits had been
added about Severus's past apprentice's? It was mentioned that Alice Longbottom had also
been an apprentice of Severus's, I did wonder what happened to her husband? Also hadn't
Severus also been a student at Hogwarts the same time as both Lily & James, or perhaps
not...or was he older than them? I really do wish that Severus had been able to get some
measure of justice upon the Dursleys for how they treated little Harry & also upon the
person who placed him with them & never checked upon the poor boy?
Hmm...also I wonder just what young Harry's schooldays will be like seeing as he's also
Severus's apprentice & will still be learning from his as well & with his sorting into
Slytherin...just how well the news of his sorting will be taken by Albus, the staff,
the rest of the student body, the ministry & the general wizarding population as a whole? How will Harry deal with the rowdy, loud students & those who don't seem to want
to study along with those that dislike Harry's supposed satus as "the-boy-who-lived?
Hmm...I wonder just who will give Harry more trouble; (a) students within his own year;
(b) students within Slytherin house; (c) or students from the other three houses, in
particular Gryffindor; (d) or will most of Harry's problems could from having to try to
avoid Headmaster Albus Dumbledore as his manipulations?
I really...really would love to read a sequel to this story or even a one-shot because
I'd just love to know how Harry's Hogwarts education would be like...or if Severus would eventually starting tearing his hair out/or it going grey either over Albus's
manipulations or over the negative influences of the other students upon his well
behaved, studious apprentice?
| Guest 7/10/12 . chapter 10
great fic so far!
| LadyFreak 6/5/12 . chapter 10
enjoyable story, but incomplete. ends too suddenly in my opinion. wish you would continue. thanks for sharing
| smiley 4/12/12 . chapter 10
i absolutely love this story very well written :D
| cyiusblack 12/18/11 . chapter 10
| LilyRaye 8/22/11 . chapter 10
Thank you for your hard work in writing this and for sharing it with us. It was very well written and was a scenario I've not seen before. I really enjoyed reading it. Taking Snape out of the Hogwarts arena and giving him a more positive experience makes him more believable as a guardian to Harry. It would be interesting to find out how the abilities and his apprenticeship changed the Hogwarts experience.
| Sheiky81 8/5/11 . chapter 10
Loved the story! U should write a sequel. Good job.
| WhiteFang001 7/29/11 . chapter 10
It's very good so far!
Please continue to write more and update soon!
I can't wait to find out how Hogwarts is going to work out for them all of is friends/enimies and how the other teachers are going to treat him...
| Gyuchin 6/16/11 . chapter 10
I was wondering if you planed a sequel?
I love the stern but careing nature of Severus!
And Brian seems really fun!
Thanks for sharing this story!
| Cassandra30 6/9/11 . chapter 4
Good! He is gone from the Dursleys.
| Cassandra30 6/9/11 . chapter 3
Very interesting idea.
| Nenefee 6/2/11 . chapter 10
Well, this could've been a good story if it was finished; I mean, surely this is not the intentionend end. There are a lot of possibilities where this could be going. This last chapter is just rushed, as if the writer simply didn't bother anymore and thought that the arrival at Hogwarts was as good an end as any.
As it is, if you write a fic about some special creature/magic/power/way of life the least you could (and should) do is describe it properly; all we know is that there are protectors with an affinity to one of six elements and one or two powers that come with it. But: what do they do exactly? What are their tasks? Goals? Which powers do they utilize that normal wizards cannot? How are they organized as a (I dare call it) minority? Which side of the war are they on?...etc pp