This is good. Looking forward to the next bit.

Where's the next chapter!? It's not fair to write something so good only to keep us waiting so long to read what happens next!

My only regret now is that I didn't discover this story after it was complete, so I could enjoy it all in one sitting...

As a side note... you should probably ignore impatient fans like me and not rush the work... but hurry up!

hehe loved your potter/molly moment; but i have to say you almost killed the story for me in ginny(sorry i just cant stand her character)

I just discovered this story, and I think it's brill! It's complex, perfectly characterised, internally consistent, has good grammar . . . everything most fanfiction lacks, TBH. On top of that, it's a great idea! You seem to have a feel for both of the worlds you're tying together, and I can see this becoming a true epic. I can't wait to see what more you have to offer!

Warslasher's an idiot.

Don't listen to him.

The story is fantastic so far and I hope you continue it soon. As a fan of both series, the interactions between the characters felt very genuine. You obviously have a very strong grasp of the feel and style of both books... your translation of Potter into Dresden's world was very well done. I can't wait to see how you translate Dresden into Potter's.

Does this have anything to do with Book 7a?

good god, part of me is screaming "Harry Potter isn't that stupid!" but then i sat down and thought, "he can be that stupid mutiple times...damn" you got me banging my head againts my desk and reminding me why i like fanfiction so much. i keep forgeting that harry potter has been always independent from adults and he dose act like an ass, but thats part being a teen i guess *shrugs* so far you have done wonderful job in the story.

Excellent story so far. I can't wait to see how Dresden interacts with Hogwarts.

Bravo and well done of course. Comments were delivered in person. Like I said, I can't wait for Harry and Harry to sit down, throw down some of Mac's finest and compare scars. I mean, sure, Potter has a leg up on that, but I'm sure Dresden has some that haven't faded yet.

Fpund this story today and I love it! Can't wait to see where you take this. :)

This chapter was terrible and nothing like what I was expecting. You kept Harry imprisoned on a couch for a week with only about a hour per day to talk to Molly before being left alone with a dog. Jesus Christ man this chapter was awful. Harry isn't even being taught magic by Dresden. You really dropped the ball with this chapter. He has a mission to destroy Voldemort to keep and in exchange for missing that you would think Mcgonnagall would atleast try to keep him busy but instead she threw him on some guys couch who isn't even teaching him any magic and told him if he leaves she will hunt him down with tracking magic. I was okay with the tracking magic up until the point you had her leave him at some guys house forced to sleep on a couch and have no human contact. I was expecting him to learn magic and spend time fighting bad guys in Chicago. Not this forced imprisonment on a couch with a tracking charm as a threat to keep him their.


0/10 this chapter fails. Infact I quit reading halfway through and deleted it from my favorites list this chapter was THAT bad.

Very well done!

This is good! It really is. I loved it when Harry did the Wingardium Leviosa... the spells were always the best part of the Harry Potter books.

But... I think we all know which story you REALLY want to update, hm?

oh dude, England won't know what hit it. great chapter man.

Great chapter, up until the Ginny part... LOL

I wouldn't mind seeing Molly hooking up with Potter, but it's your story and I'll enjoy each chapter you write. I'm looking forward tot eh next chapter!