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| Silver 2008-01-21 ch 13, anon. | abusevery good, anyway i hope Serenity doesn't doom them all. oh crap now i sound like Stork XD |
| CinderpoolANDMoonfire 2008-01-03 ch 13,  | abuseluved it! |
| rider amy 2007-11-01 ch 4, | abuseyou are good a romantic stuff and none taken about pink. |
| Lace Agate 2007-10-17 ch 13, | abuseUm, I am slightly confused by the whole ordeal. What was up with the two future Serenitys? Well, anyways, I really thought it was pretty good. ^.^ |
| DevilsAngelSaphire 2007-10-16 ch 13, | abuseDon't you dare let cyclonis win, dark ace die or the storm hawks. I finally see he does have a heart. * sighs for dramtic effic* sorry. Just had to put that in. |
| Forever in love 2007-10-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseI love it! Please don't let cyclonis win this war. Or kill dark ace. I'm sure my Friend Devil'sangelsaphire will say the same. |
| Diamonds 2007-10-16 ch 13, anon. | abusec'est si doux! THat's spanish for It's so sweet! |
| Forever diamonds 2007-10-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseawe! c'est si joli! in english that means it's soo cute! |
| That-of-a-Rose 2007-10-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoa! This is really good! You captured all of the character's personalities so well, too! Great job! Keep this up! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ |
| diggydawg 2007-10-14 ch 9, | abusenice, luv it! |
| DevilsAngelSaphire 2007-10-10 ch 12, | abuseKEEP IT UP! love it. do me a favor and don't kill the storm hawks. i'll have to hurt you for that. no I won't i'll just give you a 5 hour lecture for the next 200 years and i'll make it a 10 hour lecture on the wekends. |
| forever in love 2007-10-10 ch 12, anon. | abusedude! Sweet. You have to update! Oh, and maybe add a little more romance? i don't know if the story has no romance it sucks in my book but... if the story is funny or is really good and mysterius I love it. your story has hit the jackpot... well.. it will if you a add a little more romance. *giggles* i'm sorry I love romance sence. Well do what you want just don't let the storm hawks die. i'd die if the happens. |
| Daimonds of love 2007-10-10 ch 12, anon. | abuseOMG! Just the though of the storm hawks being deafted scares me. Way to go! Nice sotry! I just wish I found it sooner! |
| Ian 2007-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have to admin I'm a bit lost. There was a bunch of characters introduced that I don't know anything about, as well as an absence of context for me. Perhaps I missed chapter 1. Nonetheless, I enjoy the quick dialog, but get a bit lost when there are too many characters talking at once. Still, I enjoy the energy that the story brings (as always). Regardless of the situation, I am never bored with things. Keep writing! -ian PS - Did you try and phone me the other day? I say a number that I thought was yours, but wasn't sure. Funny enough, I still don't know how to get my voice mails on the cell. (Stop laughing now!!). ltr |
| SakariWolfe 2007-09-26 ch 11, | abusewow. that WAS short. But still very very good! It tells a lot in few words ^^ |