Hello XD Since your other TysonXHilary fic 'Loose Lips' was awesome, I thought I'd read this one, & it definitely didn't let me down!

You planned the short story extremely well. I mean it's just 2 people sitting & talking in a room, & yet it was engaging & a wonderful read ^^ NONE of the conversation dragged on & everything had its purpose. Once again you've stayed true to who the characters are & as a result you ended up with a sweet and sincerely written story.

I gave you advice on how to improve with 'Loose Lips', but with this fic I honestly can find no fault in it. I can only find a possible typo: (Tyson) 'You tried to help me deal, even when I didn’t want to' - was this intentional, or should it be 'help me deal with it'?

Another story to add to my favourites XD

Aw! That was adorably cute! I love to see the tenderness coming out between these two, and I loved the way how you made Tyson so sensitive, yet still kept him character! It's really great to see such well written fanfiction up! Well Done!

I've already read this story, but this is great. I love the pairing Tyson/Hilary and you do a terrific job of writing stories about them. Can you give some tips? Seriously. I like your writing that much.

so sweet! its adorable! and i lyk that in this fic u actually made tyson notice that hilary is ALWAYS THERE!! i dont think he does in the show which is so stupid!! anyway this was really nice to read.

I don't know how many times I've said this, but what you do with the personality and depth of your characters is just amazing. While reading your stuff I can just see the whole thing happening as if I'm watching on T.V. So, a translation is great job. XD.

Anyhow, I've been meaning to ask this, and I'm unsure of wether or not you answered it before... Are all your TyHil stories connected or just randomly seperated. I mean, they're great either way, I'm just not sure.

The whole thing was peppered with the perfect combination of sweet and funny. I particularly liked the last bit. 'Kinda creepy, actually.' I chuckled out loud. Which for some reason I barely do when I read.

Looking at your stories page... I've got a lot of reading and reviewing to do. Catch ya' later!

-Al

ahw this one was very cute ;)

Wow, another oneshot! This must be a good time for you. Lol. I liked it a lot. It amused me. Particularly the descriptions. Yep, I liked the descriptions. And the part where Hilary says Tyson's kinda creepy. Lol. I'm sorry that this review isn't longer but I have to go!

Aww! That was so sweet..I wanna guy who will come visit when im sick...Lol anyway great job!

i loved this it was so cute i mean...it was so cute...and fluffy
it had both their personality in it and mored i couldn't stpo reading
it was really great it was good...
and this is my first beyblade..story i reviewd...
so its that great...

kyah, i lovee everything you write. it's all so amazing. I lovee this, it is so cute. Excellent job!
~Moonlight Serenity
aka Jess

You do banter like nobody else.

It's true.

This is one of the best things you've written, and I really love it. I think the reason I like it so much is because you take what is such an overused idea in my fandom and made it GOOD for yours. (Seriously, in my fandom the 'he gets sick, she cares for him' thing is done to death)

But anyways, all mistakes I found were dealt with before posting, so you know my thoughts there.

And I'm glad you liked the quote. I thought of it as soon as I started reading the story for the first time. It fits so bloody well, eh?

Anyways, that's all from me on this one. Can't wait till you finish up chapter one of your new chaptered fic.

-Shawn the Unfunny Joke