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Sarah
2009-11-11 . chapter 20
I think I've nearly read all of your stories now, and this series is definitely one of my favourites :)

Just one slight comment (and I hate to be the one pointing out faults), but the disguise that Harry was going to use for Lila escorting him out was that she had been the bonder for the Unbreakable Vow that Harry wouldn't try to commit suicide anymore, right?
But, isn't the punishment for breaking an Unbreakable Vow death? So if Harry tried to commit suicide, he'd die and wouldn't that be what he wanted anyway?

Of course it's nothing life threatening and I still love love love your stories :)
jHeyTTernallie
2009-10-10 . chapter 24
love your stories! they are so adorable! i could just read them all day. ^^

sadly, i have to study for our finals *bummer*

very good and well written fic!
Chiku
2009-09-06 . chapter 24
honestly? you're brilliant.
i must have read almost all of your fics by now and i dont think i've come across a more captivating or prolific author on ff.. and your style leaves people longing for more. keep going at it, i look forward to reading more of your fiction.
Doni
2009-08-09 . chapter 24
Great sequel! Amazing story!
Jensindenial3516
2009-07-11 . chapter 24
Amazing fic! I'm kinda loving all of your fics right now, lol...just going through the list.
Juliashka Shu
2009-07-05 . chapter 24
amazing - both parts of the series)
Cathy Daine
2009-06-28 . chapter 24
I seriously doubt there are words that can describe how utterly perfect your story is. Reading the ending actually made my eyes water from pure exhilaration! The plot was not only fascinating and managed to keep me on my toes throughout but it was also beyond original and masterfully executed.

It might seem like I'm just heaping praise on you but I can say without a shred of a doubt that you are one of the best writers for Drarry fiction on this site. This coming from someone who has been through the entire archive of completed Harry and Draco fanfics several times (I have no life I know:p)

The characters just came alive and the relationship between Draco and Harry was just... I can't even begin to describe the image of their bond, trust and love that you have succeeded in conjuring in my mind. Countless of strands intertwining becoming blinding in its brilliancy, poignant in its tenderness and utterly heart wrenching in its perfection.

The only thing left for me to do is humbly thank you for sharing this story and to tell you that I look forward to any updates and ideas you'll have in the future.

Sincerely,

Cathy Daine
sierra's scarlet
2009-05-28 . chapter 18


I was really worried for a bit, but when he realized the past can't be changed even if memories are I had to smile. It's like overcoming the Big Brother of 1984 - no human has the power to change the past... even if they rewrite history, they are wrong.
St. Peaches
2009-05-26 . chapter 24
Draco;"Meanwhile, it was quite refreshing to always have someone in the house ready and willing to shag, or be shagged, or have a row, or have a row while shagging."

Now that's love!

Great story and again, a greater plot. You're pretty good at it. Just the right cliffhangers just in the right places... That's enough to keep me drooling on my keyboard, thank you.
St. Peaches
2009-05-26 . chapter 21
I suppose I’m not straight anymore.
I can’t wait to tell him.

Neither can I, Harry... Neither can I...
St. Peaches
2009-05-26 . chapter 18
Please tell me that Scrimsh*t will be hanging from the ceiling by his own guts? Or... Nevermind. Let's not reveal how much of a butcher I am. *can't even hurt an ant* Oh, yes, so dangerous... *giggle-snorts*
St. Peaches
2009-05-26 . chapter 17
You know, I think this was necessary. They were too happy to keep being happy, in my oppinion, of course.
:P
St. Peaches
2009-05-26 . chapter 16
He's th straight, but he loves Draco. He loves Draco, but he wouldn't make love to him because he's straight... Right... Makes very accepted sense.
St. Peaches
2009-05-25 . chapter 11
Draco came, and Harry thought it wasn’t because of the kiss, or even the stroking, but from the fact that Harry drew back and smiled at him just before he did it. Of course, Harry considered, looking down as warm liquid absolutely soaked his fingers, the stroking probably had something to do with it.

Oh, our little kid, our Harrykins has grown up! Look at him, darling, see how smart and talented he's become!
(:P)
:)
Loved it.
;)
St. Peaches
2009-05-25 . chapter 5
“Less cautious than I would be,” Harry muttered as he nudged the door open. “Of course, maybe the house-elves are all standing guard around his bed.”

Oh, just imagine that!
:D
And the innocent bedroom scene- wonderful!:
The warmth of the hold, and the unexpected firmness of it when Draco closed his hand around Harry’s wrist, sent a jolt through him. But it was the same kind of jolt Harry would have felt if the unicorn he were watching had turned and come towards him to rest its horn on his shoulder, instead of bounding away.
:)

Because if he hated and feared Draco Malfoy, he shouldn’t feel this much longing to watch him dress, or have this much difficulty turning his eyes away.

Idiot!!.!!.!!
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