I'm so happy to see this sequel! :D (dances around) Wow, I don't know what to say. Let's see...Max seems very cold and hard here. I guess that could be attributed to time spent at Manticore and jealousy towards Grace, but it's still unfamiliar. Sorta reminds me of pilot Max, I suppose, whereas I was expecting AJBAC Max. I'm eager to see how she develops in this fic. I'm also glad to see the issue of premarital sex being raised, seeing as how Grace is a chaplain. I would love to hear her response to Max's question. Shoot...I would love to read the next installment. :)

Yay! A sequel to John Doe! Looking very good, so far. The Grace and Max interaction is just cracking! Knowing the way these things go, there's bound to be a scene where all three of them, Max, Logan and Grace, are going to be in the same room together. And I can't wait to read about it when it happens! I'm going to send up a fervent prayer to the gods (yes, that's plural) that ff.net finally gets its act together, just so you can finish posting this story, and I can finish reading it!