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spinningleaves
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuseOo good good good! I enjoyed it!
Sexy Bookworm
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abusemy god, that was so cute. I love the song, too.
laurzz
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abusei've read this before, and i loved it. therefore, i was like, completely ashamed when i saw i hadnt even reviewed it.!

My god. you have their banter down to a tee!

Seriously, that could be a scene. No joke.

And this last bit

“Good.” She popped up once more, a devious smirk plastered across her features. “’Cause when I get a hold of his phone, I’m setting the ring tone to Celine Dion and changing the language to Korean.”

seriously made my week. I havent laughed as much in a long time...!

Seriously. great job!
LocoGreggo
2007-09-09
ch 1,
abuseGood job.
scoob2222
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuseThis was adorable, adn so Danny.

And I'm off to find that song
serenity2bliss
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseloved it! That man i sleep with cell! lol! I think that's very Danny!

As much i love DL, i think the highlight for this fic is when Flack gave the little speech about how fragile Danny is :) I love that part because i think that's something flack will do; looking out for his friend because he's just a plain ol sweetie :D

Great fic!
BackDownGravity
2007-09-02
ch 1, anon.
abuseMy favorite writer is back. I hope you have had an awesome summer (and a dozen or so more fics ready to go), you have not missed a beat. I'm not one for song fics, but you worked it out. I love how you write Danny/Lindsay: flirtation without sap is the perfect combo. My favorite part was hands down the phone call; I could see that conversation playing out on the show. Flack was a the perfect subject. However, I'm hoping we see more reactions from the peanut gallery. Love It. Random question: Is ThirtySeven permanently off the books?
TBD
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abuseGreat story :)
I loved Danny messing with Lindsay's phone and especially the 'don't hurt him' conversation from Flack. Brilliant.
Kegel
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this. :)
bando2
2007-09-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's so funny when people talk about starting line. I went to school with those guys. Nice work
mel60
2007-09-01
ch 1,
abuseOh Holy Christ! I'm so glad you are back! You have made my entire summer. What a great way to come back, too. I have missed and craved these stories.

"He returned to hover over her, mischievous grin curving lopsidedly, his lips forming the three word proclamation of affection in silence, crashing into her and kissing her thoroughly. His voice hadn’t found the courage to speak it out loud, but she understood, she always did."

Holy Crap! No one else could write this stuff as unbelievably well as you. This is amazing!
Spontaneity
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseI love that song... SO MUCH!

And this whole thing was hilarious... I really think German would be better for Danny... idk why.


Favorite line: "I can't believe we're actually doing this, Flack."
ReJo
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuseDanny's so bad, but he's cute so I'll forgive him :)
sugah66
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abuse*flying tacklehug*

YOU'RE BACK! YAY! I MISSED YOU!

Seriously. There has been an obscene lack of decent fics over the past few months. It's disgusting, really. So I am supremely glad to see that you've returned, with presents.

I love the idea of Danny messing with Lindsay's phone, as I can totally see him doing that. I actually want to use the ringtone thing in my Ghosts sequels, assuming I ever get to them. It's something small, but with possible ramifications, and so perfect for Danny's character.
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