Definitely loved it. Really liked the parallel between Franz to Patroclus - an awesome idea, that. Not sure what else to say except that I enjoyed it a lot and it was wonderfully done.

Wow, the writing on this is beautiful! Yes its short but it seems to me almost more of a character sketch than anything and it does a great job with that. I love the book and I really liked the descriptions here. Two thumbs up!

now THIS is impressive. just on general terms, impressive, but for fanfiction (especially on such a nonselective site), it's even more so. very lyrical. a nice title too, and i notice that mainly because i have a pretty hard time with titles, at least for fanfic. i wish i could say more, but i don't have any criticisms or suggestions; i just enjoyed reading this piece.

Hi Rah-la

Thanks for leaving a review in my story "The Truth about Misery" and its true that I switch tenses a lot (Don't worry, I already edited it. English is not my primary language but I'm working on it). As far as this story goes, I love the way you describe Albert here. It was detail by detail. The only problem is that it was too short for me. In my humble opinion, I wish you could make it a little longer. ;)