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jka1
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
Omg this was so sad!! Short but powerful, great job ^-^
Wuff
2008-03-12 . chapter 1
Touching story - very well-written! Yes, I'd like to see the fanart!
stella8h8chang
2008-03-04 . chapter 1
Hi! I really, really like this story. It's short, but intense. Grindelwald's desperation really shines through here, as well as Albus' extraordinarily complex feelings about everything.

I can't believe you had the foresight to publish this before JKR's revelation in October 07!! That's amazing :D

The only thing I'm concerned about is the rating - while I personally don't mind about f-words (I use them far too much myself), I think it might be a good idea to bump the K up to a T just to be safe.
kara
2008-02-13 . chapter 1
i really liked your characterization of Dumbledore here- it captures the personality that readers know, and also his past, if that makes any sense...
Pied Flycatcher
2008-01-20 . chapter 1
Very sad. I liked it. :)
ooosk
2007-10-27 . chapter 1
*jaw drops* amazing!
plungers-rock-my-socks
2007-10-21 . chapter 1
This is really good.
chilly
2007-09-14 . chapter 1
Loved it.
Kiraling
2007-09-10 . chapter 1
Oh, I've already read it on Grindeldore, and I absolutely loved it! I hope you'll write more pieces about this pairing (OTP, I might add ^^)soon:)
illuvatree
2007-09-07 . chapter 1
That was lovely. :)
kerplank
2007-09-06 . chapter 1
this was good...

do you have any recommendations for other stories with this pairing?
The.Wonder.Of.The.World.Is.Gon
2007-08-31 . chapter 1
Fntastic! real orginal!

review my stories?

=)

p.s i luv grindelwald lmao
XsilverXdoeX
2007-08-31 . chapter 1
that was great! this probably seems really dense, but I never even considered that there was more between Grindelwald & Dumbledore, but now that i see it...oh how could i have missed it! I mean it is tragic even if they were just friends, but oh my god! that was so wonderful, short but sweet. I luv that exchange 'come to give me the Kiss, then?" "of sorts," that is brilliant! i want to see the picture like mad now. what is it of? whatever...that was great, i'm reading more of ur stuff if it exists!

keep up the great work,
XsilverXdoeX
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