Reviews for The TriSchool Tournament

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SlytherinSlayer21 2008-07-04 ch 2,	abusegreat story
Faireboiz 2008-06-26 ch 2,	abuseFor a short (lol) 2 chapter story, this one I must say had a great deal of character, and story line developement. It was a wonderful read. cant wait to read more of your stories. Thanks for your time and effort.
Vilkath 2008-06-25 ch 2,	abuseWell I like this chapter as well but I have to say it is more of a seperate one shot then a real continuation of the first chapter. In the first story the international goverments were portrayed as smart, effecient and over all decent orginzations. They set up decent amount of secruity, captured and jailed criminals, organised logic bending task etc. Then in this chapter the wizarding world is now portrayed as complete idiots not to mention corrupt, over all as bad or worse then the British magical goverment under fudge. Sure things might change after re-elections and changes of office but in only 3 years I highly doubt every one suddenly are complete idiots. Still I do like the mystery and such set up, plus Harry growing a pair and willing to kill people after official chanels and jails proved useless.
Vilkath 2008-06-25 ch 1,	abuseI have to say I loved this tourment, even more then the orginal. Best part was perhaps the start of the tourment where the increased security measures were put in place. I did always find it funny that international schools and visitors of importance jsut trusted the rather corrupt, foolish and incompetent british ministry to take care of things in almost all the stories especialy after both the world cup and several recent attacks in the past few years at hogwarts. I also rather enjoyed the altered task, while some stories may change how they are solved it does get a little old to read one GoF story after another using the same exact trials. I suppose the only real logic flaw in this story is Harry seems to paint all the magical schools as dumb as Hogwarts in common sense with how they all responded to the challenges, and yet the people putting them together were smart enough to do it. It sort of leap in logic to have those same crappy school standards turn out decent officials to come up with the logic heavy task that no other wizard seemed to think about.
Allamonalla 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseYou have a weird sense of humor. But to be fair, so do I. By the way, you forgot to set the status to 'completed'.
LovelyLittleAngel144 2008-04-23 ch 2,	abuselol. i liked this story. update soon!
major wallace 2008-04-15 ch 2,	abusenice
abyssgirl 2008-04-08 ch 2,	abuseyou write the best stories. i'm envious. please write another!
MeghanReviews 2008-04-06 ch 2,	abuseHe does update slowly. I've had the pleasure of reading some of his originals that he is currently finishing before coming back to fanfic. Should only take him to midway through this month. He writes pretty fast. Faster than me. I have several chapters more on my yahoogroup and I'm waiting on my beta to send me more. I plan to finally start posting quickly again. Chapter 42 should be out Monday. I agree that the forth book is by far the best in the series. I could read it again and again without any problems. I still haven't wanted to reread book seven yet. It just sits there and cries in a corner. Can't wait to see your third bit. As I seem to be devouring your whole set of works I will be getting to Common Sense shortly. :) Give me an email to contact you with next time if you'd like, because I can't find a way to private message you. Meghan
MeghanReviews 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseFantastic story. Jbern's story and yours are my favorite Tri-Tourney stories to date. :) Keep up the good work. I hope there's another chapter since you don't have this listed as complete. Excellent, excellent.
Nosferatum 2008-04-04 ch 2,	abuseYour fics are somewhat refreshing. In small quantities )
Musings-of-Apathy 2008-03-29 ch 2,	abuseExcellent story for a short one. Did you mean for this one to be complete? You didn't indicate, but it seems complete enough. Thank you for writing. Mike (MoA)
ohhhdear 2008-02-13 ch 2,	abuseStrong!Harry is much more believable than JKR's version. I really enjoyed this!
noylj 2008-02-08 ch 2,	abuseVery good story. It meets my criteria for a good Harry Potter story: 1) the dark lord is killed (that is the only weakness, there is still a Riddle mess that is alive) 2) Dumbles is killed. Not listening and triggering the whole thing was so very Dumbly. 3) Malfoy is killed. Any Malfoy should be killed on sight 4) Sirius is still alive 5) Harry is smarter than the average wizard. As you can tell, canon only gave me the first two.
Drajjen 2008-01-26 ch 2,	abuseEven though this was writting quite awhile ago, and is finished I thought you may still appreciate a reveiw. I really enjoyed the fic. It got me laughing in places at the incompetence of some of the people involved. It was quite entertaining. I would suggest though that you start adding some ship into your fics. No, I am not talking about writing a romance, but this fic was a perfect example of one you could of just mentioned that Harry, had met and was casually dating someone. Matter of fact, you need not even mention a name with the ship. Just say that he was dating. I know that sounds odd, but in some since it shows that Harry is moving on with his life more so than just going to University does. Odd I know, but it just shows that he is growing up. Although, by looking at your favorites and your bio, I notice that you are somewhat of a slash fan. In that case I would ask that if you do take my advice and add in a ship here or there (even if the person's name is not even mentioned), please put that it contains references to slash, so folks like me can disreguard reading that particular fic. Just so you know, I don't begrudge folks the right to read or write slash, I simply don't want to read it myself. At any rate, great fic, just like most of your other ones.

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