Just left a lengthty review on one of your 'Who is laughing now', where I criticied how you wrote the Joker. Here you did him almost perfectly. I didn't quiet liked the "Or I can kill the 'innocents', still get the birdy where I want him. Why just the kill the bird when you can kill other people too?" That one was a bit too calculating and explaining for the Joker, but now I'm netpicking.

Best. Freaking. Story. Ever.

LOVE THE STORY!

LOVE THE SEQUEAL!

But you need to do another! I want to know what could happen the next morning! Does Tim and Jack make up? Does Tim continue being Robin? Please! Inquiring minds want to know!

you know, this is one of those storys that you just HAVE to continue (or the fans will cry...)

you have to continue this!

Oh man, see this is why you should never save your own family. They can tell.

Ya know...Jack Drake is one of those characters that makes it easy for you to hate him. I mean gosh, he's already sent our boy Tim outta town to the boarding school. And now that he's there he's trying to just forget about him completely it seems! I mean we're talking a SEVERE dislike of the man I have going here. But this was good! heh I'd looooooooooove a sequel so we can all see how well Tim...um..."talks" his way out of this little situation here. Great idea! )

hehe, 'wide-eyed birdy.' hey, I liked it :)

I really liked this, even though I don't like Jack. Grr. I hope there's a sequel to this.

It wasn't *that* bad... Actually, I liked it. Easy to read & good characterisation. Definitely beats work. Cute last line 8)