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| hidesR. 2007-09-07 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis was way too rushed, i know it wasnt meant to be a long story, but you atleast could've made the story smoother and more slowerr... I like the plot though, and I think it's great. It's a good idea with pony being taken away at 3 and stuff, but once again.. wayy too rushed. |
| outsiderslover92 2007-09-07 ch 4,  | abusemore more plz its really good ! |
| dreamer 3097 2007-09-06 ch 4, | abusea good story |
| Swizzlet-Schiz 2007-09-06 ch 4, | abuseomg!best chapter yet!! |
| GreaserFreak13 2007-09-04 ch 3, | abuseLucky! I started school today. I had to go school shopping on my vacation! How unfair. |
| Swizzlet-Schiz 2007-09-04 ch 3, | abuseyay update |
| pmcurtis 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseI'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Update ASAP, please. |
| bluesweetie1978 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abusehey great story keep up the great work |
| dreamer 3097 2007-09-03 ch 3, | abusethis is good |
| MidnightAsh7184 2007-09-02 ch 2, | abusethats so sad u made me cry! |
| JohnnysTuffMustangs 2007-09-01 ch 2, | abuseHey, I really REALLY like this story...It's so sad!! But it's incredibly well written, and I think you did a great job at it =] Keep up the wonderful work!! |
| outsiderslover92 2007-09-01 ch 2, | abusemore more plz !! its rele good ! |
| Swizzlet-Schiz 2007-09-01 ch 2, | abuseawh so sad but cute. lovely dear. update soon. |
| dreamer 3097 2007-09-01 ch 2, | abusewhat happened to ponyboy |
| dreamer 3097 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abusea really good start |