jesus. you haven't updated in 3 freaking years! ITS SO AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL I NEED YOU TO FINISH IT. PLEASE. I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER. ITS LIKE MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE, I JUST NEED YOU TO KEEP WRITING.its the best fanfiction EVER. you are a genius writer, don't stop!

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You so need to continue! The story's just gettin' good and I can still feel atightening in my chest from what Angel said last! This is my favorite fanfiction so far, and trust me, I've read alot!

Interesting, awesome, and emotional as usual. My only complaint is that I don't see Fang as the type that would call Max "baby"- it just doesn't fit them.
Other than that, good job and keep updating!

Awesome write more tht would be so awesome if youwrote more and wats up with angel?

i loved the chapter. i was glad that Max and Fang got to spend some time together through all the mahem of everyday life even if they were killing robots and getting their asses kicked;lol.
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You could just make Ella and the rest of the flock tell Alex that Fang is a nickname for Nick. Like a childhood nickname or something. It's not a problem. ;)

This was kind of amazing. Wow. You capture the characters so well AND make it incredibly interesting AND I just can't wait to find out what comes next! Thanks for being a fantastic writer :D It takes a lot of talent and guts, and you have that.

aw, that touched my heart!:)

Please update soon! Love the chapter fang is soo sweet :) will max be a ble to play soccer again? I hope she does! Love ur story keep writing!

i like this chapter, and i reviewed =]
write more soon please

thank you for finally updating, i have been waiting for this for a while! its pretty good so far and i hope that you finish this story, i would hate for such a great start to go to waste!!

this is really good keep writing! :D

aw angel is so sweet=)update ssoon

awesome chapter! hope max will be ok.