Great chapter! All good things must come to an end. Until then update soon! lol

hmm

I wonder what Edward will decide..

love the indecision, but PLEASE let him say yes! btw, I totally love the idea for the new story. I'd be happy to be a beta if you need one

Is bella going to be pregnant? hint. hint. Your story is set up so well that it actually has a logical excuse for why she would be pregnant... Think about it, she and edward did "it" before he was turned into a vampire and became steril...

please say yes!

aw how sweet

...not much to say...still good, just nothing to say...I'm glad you left put all the minor things that were explained in twilight (them being vamps & all) honestly, at 1st I was annoyed & thought you were skipping a lot of stuff, but then I realized that I already knew what you were skipping. plus, everyone who tries to summarize the stuff you left out usually does a pretty bad job...

*smiles*

lol author's note. what's with this story and drama though? honestly, you've made me want to cry for 3 chapters now!

yes, that is PLENTY missery! get to the happy!

a ring would have been better. if it had been a ring I wouldn't be about to cry over this well-written tradgity (yes, I know I mispelled that)

next chapter please . please right a nother chapter please

julery that bella can't go with to buy. hm. what can it be? ha! JK. painfully obvious...it's a ring or something of that nature. (I'm gonna feel really stupid if it's not a ring, so I'm gonna be safe & leave any other type of julery open too...but it's obviously for bella)

wow, very well-written. from the summary, I can tell it's going to be really good. (forgive me if I don't review every chapter, I try to, but I often lack the patience to wait for my computer to open the window)

OMG

did Edward agree that easily?

ahh. i want bella to become a vampire but then again i dont. and for you new story, i think its a great idea. you should go for it.