Aw that was so cute! Very creative plot line, and idea. I would've thought of all people Alice would've wanted to remember what happened since she doesn't have any human memories at all. I loved this story, it was so well written, and unique!

THat was an awesome and very original story, I LOVED IT!

wow

only problem is that there is NO buildup to this point. it goes from "hey this is Bella. Bella, meet everyone!" to "Bella i think im in love with you" and bellas is completely comfortable around edward. its cute, but there's nothing to give it substance or depth

cute, sweet, thanks for sharing

Excellent intro! I'm completely fascinated.

Really good work... time travel and vampires? Love those!

gahh

awesome story!

and i LOVE that poem

it was in an episode of desperate housewives and i constantly rewinded it on dvr because its so amazing

great choice of poem

and were on poetry now in english class

ahh getting off topic as usual

now i must read every other story youve created ]

so he isntt a virgin ok u dont have to put up with my stupidness unless i find some tiny bit of information that im sure ill make confusing

i dont even think that sentence made sense

blah blah haha

and im glad u skipped the volturi part.. i dont think i could read another fanfic with them being involved in it hehe

on to the next chapter..

so..edwards and bella did it when he was a human..?

hehe just wondering..yes i tend to become slow most of the moments in my life...

I liked the ending... good story.

Wait... so Bella knows they are vamps? Edward is a prude, as is Bella! get your facts right young lady!

BTW Coca Cola SUCKS.

So... they are vamps in the future? hmm..

-_- Sometimes your chapters are really short. Good chapter though. Mike needs to die ina fire.

What a way to end the chapter. gah