Oh geez, I love this. It's hilarious and very IC, and the kiss scene was just fantabulous. I've read a few of your other stories to, and they're all very good. Nice job, and keep it up!

Oh wow; this just made me completely giddy and gleeful and wow, just wow. PERFECT ending spot. Wonderfully in character. I loved it. I don't even know what to say except I was grinning like crazy while reading it and the end just made me melt. It was so heartfelt and lovely. Marvelous job.

That was absolutely fantastic. The tension, the denial, the kiss. Awesome.
~Ani

“You kiss her.”

“No. You don’t.”

“You don’t.”

ha ha ha ha.
love it.

good kiss scene too. i would completely send this to my lover as a manual extraordinaire except i don't want him to know that i dig old disney characters making out. but seriously? good kiss scene.

I have to say, I loved the idea about Jack being a pushy kisser...I think that line about him scared he might have slobbered on someone was completely priceless. Well written, fantastically romantic bit of work, loved it! Thank you for posting!

Too cute!

Seriously, it was. The perfect amount of fluff and sarcasm and anticipation. The conversation was right, and I love David being so knowledgeable about kissing.

And the end, of course. David's gasp. YES.

Wow... very good. I got chills at the end. Really, very well written.

Just wonderful!

It is an injustice that this beautiful, lovely fic doesn't have more reviews. So I'm making my own little contribution.

Really, I completely loved this. I thought the interaction was really natural and the characterization was familiar, but not cliched.

Okay, I'm being super over-analytical. It was hot. My heart rate definitely sped up at the end.

I'd read more tonight, but I have to sleep at some point. Good stuff, my friend!

Oh, yummy. I come back from a weekend out of town without Internet and findan alert for this waiting in my mailbox - what more could I want? Beautiful drawn tension in the kiss (or not quite kiss), and the Mindy-Melinda thing amused me. Plus, Jack is TOTALLY a pushy kisser. He just about swallows Sarah whole in the movie!

That was amazing! You just have to love David and tghe effect he can have on Jack! *hehe* who would have thought that he has to learn how to kiss *hehe*

I loved the ending ... very sensual *wink*

FANTASTIC , I hope to read more soon *smile* KEEP IT UP

And cheers to Javid ^__^

Sweet story you've got here. Funny how David was giving Jack kissing tips. I think the last part was very cute, where Jack took all of David's advice and made it worth wild. Very nicely done.

Very original idea.

The change in having David the more learned of the two was brilliant.

I loved the visceral and tactile style of this piece. It added depth and made the story even more sensual.

Favorite lines:

“Screw sex ed. They should have just taught a class about how to kiss. “

“Jack laughed nervously, wondering how much tongue was too much. He never slobbered on anyone, had he?”

“Chest pounding, he eased his head next to David’s. As their cheeks brushed, Jack let out a ragged breath near David’s ear and immersed his fingers into his curls. Immediately, David gasped. He leaned his head back into Jack’s open hand, rolling it so Jack’s fingers worked through his hair.”

Hot-damn this was good.