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| Graymoon74 2008-01-28 ch 1,  | abuseOkay...second story that has me near tears =) |
| Immokk 2007-10-03 ch 1, | abuseReally lovely. Beautifully written. 'And like the water that swept her away, he broke' Brilliant. |
| cabooklover21 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseMy god, this was so beautiful. |
| chiops 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseWhat a wonderful, heartbreaking, story. Very intense - and with Happy Ending, thankfully. |
| angsty-otaku 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant pre-ep(?). Stories like this give hope! |
| Wander52 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abusePowerful, powerful...all in one page. |
| microgirl 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was really beautiful. The scene between Grissom and Sara was heartbreaking, but it showed how much they needed each other. I especially loved this part: "She wanted so much for him to move her, to let her curl up against him, her head tucked safely between his chin and his shoulder. She wanted to leave him like that–if she had to leave him at all." Those were great lines. Wonderful job! Thanks for sharing :) |
| Aydin's One 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI just love all of your stories, and I would love to see this from Grissom's POV too! Wonderful job! |
| devilssmile666 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWow...this was just...WOW!! This story was so beautifully written. This was excellent, and keep up the great work!:D |
| closethedoor14 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely heartbreaking and beautiful. |
| jtbwriter 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseScare me now! This is good-but you take us on quite a ride! At least the "open eyes" part is hopeful...thanks for giving a good interpretation to all the spoilers about the water and everything! |
| WitchGirl 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was very powerful. I loved the "I need you" and how Grissom echoes her. Moving. Eloquent. I applaud you, VERY good job. |
| geekluvinskater 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was just beautiful. Very lovely. |
| Amanda Hawthorn 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseLast night I watched the promo and broke when Grissom was in tears. Today I'm in tears because this story is just absolutely beautiful.Even beautiful is not enough to describe it, but you really captured everything in this story. It's perfect, thank you so much. |
| BabyBunting 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuse*sob* lump in my throat... fingers crossed TPTB have the same thing in mind as you! |