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| P'tfami 2007-09-30 ch 1,  | abuseIt's in keeping with TP's penchant for dramatic irony - I like the way you mingled Vimes's inner stone face with his current thoughts. (umm...not sure if I made myself clear but you get the idea) A good one shot. |
| Russ Smith 2007-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice! You've got a good ear for characters, and I'd like to hear more of this dark little possible history. I just wonder how you'd handle Carrot diverting from the classic Pratchett villian, that is, a sociopath. We caused his change of heart from supporting Vetinari to deciding to take his place? This could make a really great evil story when fleshed out. Loved it. |
| GoonlaLagoon 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseWow...Carrot gone mean is weird. |
| celticfox 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseCarrot gone wrong is very creepy. |
| Estelle Tiniwiel 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseThat is a very interesting little chapter. Carrot does seem to have moulded into the role of Patrician quite well - but there was one thing I couldn't quite work out or rather, believe. Did Carrot kill Vetinari? That's what it seems like but somehow I couldn't really imagine him doing it. Or did someone else kill Vetinari and Carrot just had plans laid to take control if Vetinari should ever die? Very interesting, very good, really, really curious as to see what happens next. |
| Big Cat 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseAh... that was a breath of fresh air. Thank you for this marvelous fantastic PERFECT fic. Amazing! Absolutely great! I love it! Carrot as patrician is probably the best Ankh-Morpork would have after Vetinari. He IS the city, indeed. The idea you have developed is absolutely brilliant. Good onya! I'm so proud of you! Do some more. Please. Soonish! Cat |