OMG Fluff attack!! That was cute beyond measure.

Except Neji seemed, well, a bit... Gay?

He's still awesome, though. xD And his... Almost-gayness doesn't detract from the story at all; it was wonderful. The story, I mean.

Tenten's so cute when she thought she was sick. Her platonic relationship with Neji is also super sweet.

I love LeeTen!
I always prefered LeeTen over NejiTen.
Maybe it's because I like NejiSaku ^^
Great story!

so cute! Loved it!

Your story is just so hilariously awesome. Neji was hilarious as well.

Lawl, someone should tell Neji that he can't count..."Lee, will you go to the dance with me?" is nine words, not six. Some prodigy he is.

Great fic; love the Lee/Ten.

I think the pairing Tenten/Lee is a rather good pairing ! they're just perfect for each other.

This is great! Poor Neji. Actually...imagining Team Gaikashi has brought me much mental torture lol :)

That was awesome! So cute! I love the way you portray Neji! And I also liked how you made it seem like Neji and Tenten are best friends. Poor Neji... I'm surprised Gai didn't get all mad at him for dancing with his eternal rival, or something. One of the best I've ever read!

I don't ship this couple, but this is so freaking adorable. I absolutely love everything, everyone is perfectly in character (Neji was my favorite XD) and the whole connection to the title and events of the story were well written. never would've thought of the NejixSakura coupling either, but this was still really funny and great to read. keep it up!

rotfl! too cute!

That was super! Totally believable and realistic =D Neji and Sakura were priceless too.

Heh, pretty good actually. Most of the time, Tenten fics make her extremely out of character, even though we haven't seen much of her. I like this one, although it is a little fast-paced and Neji is being slightly un-Neji-like. ^_^ Excellent job with the plot idea etc.

Commentary for both 2 and 3:
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-/"We wait for a sign."

/Tenten blinks at him. "What?"

/Neji waves a hand impatiently. "You will see."

/They sit in silence for two minutes, until, for the second time that day; an object cloaked in a cloud of smoke materializes on the stool next to them. Tenten blinks, and when the smoke clears, she is faced with the sleepy-looking visage of Nara Shikamaru. "Yo," he says laconically, raising a hand in greeting./

-/For his part, Neji just sighs. "Gai-sensei, -must- you do this every Tuesday?"/

-/Between thorough mental chastisements of his own self for making such a horrifying statement.../ XD


I must commend you on your proficient use of italics. And Neji. The funny is too much! And is also an anchor against the swarm of summer feelings! GAH. :O

...omg Gaikashi. *dies*

*LOVES*

Dude, this is /so funny/. Neji especially. XD I've never liked NejiTen fics (found them DULL AS HELL), but the two of them have great chemistry as friends.

It is from this story that I realize, "THIS is why there are Team Gai fans."

Love!
-Mel